I really like the analogy here; it's just so extremely clever. Because people usually use drugs and stuff with love right? But you used tea instead. Like, it's not something addicting or anything, but it's something necesary for our own health. I can totally see how, you know, Kai's like tea and if Reita doesn't 'drink' him (OHGAWD THAT SOUNDED SO WRONG), then Reita won't be...er...emotionally healthy...you get what I'm saying here? xD Absolutely wonderful.
There's a spelling mistake or two in this paragraph. Italiced words are the correct ones: “I don't think we should get back together ...” honestly expressed the brunette “... this is like what? The third time we broke up? If we get back, we'll just break up again … and I … I am tired of this” dejectedly stated the brunette. There's also another one in which you use brake instead of break; you'll find it.
Aaaaaaw. You've just made my story so important by pointing that out! I didn't even notice *scratch back of her head*. Serioauly, you just gave a new meaning to my story, so thank you a lot! And ... it sounded SO WORNG ... I LOVED IT. lololol.
Also thanks agian for pointing out the spelling mistakes! Not the first time,a nd unfortunately giving to the speed I write, and the time I don't have it won't be the last, but I have been trying to be more careful m(_ _ )m
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This is amazing!! And like the person who commented before me, I really like the analogy you used. I've never seen an analogy anything like this, very unique :) Hope you update House of Sin some time soon, I've been dying to read a story with Kai in it. Seriously he needs more love xD
Aaaaaaaaw *HAPPY DANCE* Thank you so much!! Now I really feel like going to drink some green tea myself I will say.
And I was taking a little break from House of SIn, but I am planning to get back on it soon! I didn't know I had so many readers for that story, it makes me quite happy!
And ... I wonder why he doesn't, but with me, he will forever~ GO KAI
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Heh I like how to comment this it says 'coming clean' hehe that sounds dirty... *cough* Anyways... I couldn't help but imagine a chibi Reita going 'I need you like i need tea!' Yeah, that'll get ya laid Reita... Awesome job, I liked it :)
HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA Oh wow ... never thought of it that way ... seriusly, just thinking about the "law" aspect of it. Good catch!
You all should be wirters more than me! I imagined a chibi Reita saying that as well, and I nearly melted, aaaaaw! And that will definitely get him laid! lol
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I really like the analogy here; it's just so extremely clever. Because people usually use drugs and stuff with love right? But you used tea instead. Like, it's not something addicting or anything, but it's something necesary for our own health. I can totally see how, you know, Kai's like tea and if Reita doesn't 'drink' him (OHGAWD THAT SOUNDED SO WRONG), then Reita won't be...er...emotionally healthy...you get what I'm saying here? xD Absolutely wonderful.
There's a spelling mistake or two in this paragraph. Italiced words are the correct ones:
“I don't think we should get back together ...” honestly expressed the brunette “... this is like what? The third time we broke up? If we get back, we'll just break up again … and I … I am tired of this” dejectedly stated the brunette.
There's also another one in which you use brake instead of break; you'll find it.
Don't kill me ;__; I'm a spelling nerd.
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Aaaaaaw. You've just made my story so important by pointing that out! I didn't even notice *scratch back of her head*. Serioauly, you just gave a new meaning to my story, so thank you a lot! And ... it sounded SO WORNG ... I LOVED IT. lololol.
Also thanks agian for pointing out the spelling mistakes! Not the first time,a nd unfortunately giving to the speed I write, and the time I don't have it won't be the last, but I have been trying to be more careful m(_ _ )m
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Hope you update House of Sin some time soon, I've been dying to read a story with Kai in it. Seriously he needs more love xD
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And I was taking a little break from House of SIn, but I am planning to get back on it soon! I didn't know I had so many readers for that story, it makes me quite happy!
And ... I wonder why he doesn't, but with me, he will forever~ GO KAI
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*cough* Anyways...
I couldn't help but imagine a chibi Reita going 'I need you like i need tea!'
Yeah, that'll get ya laid Reita...
Awesome job, I liked it :)
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Oh wow ... never thought of it that way ... seriusly, just thinking about the "law" aspect of it. Good catch!
You all should be wirters more than me! I imagined a chibi Reita saying that as well, and I nearly melted, aaaaaw! And that will definitely get him laid! lol
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now I want tea D:
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;__; *burnt tongue*
that's too hot
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WHERE CAN I BUY THAT BRAND OF TEA?!!! KAI-TEA. <3
LOVED IT. <3<3<3<3
Though, I'm more of a coffee person.>_>
*hates tea* xDD
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I was looking online, and unfortunately, Reita is the only one who owns that type of tea. Sorry m(_ _ )m.
I'm really glad you loved it!
I actually like coffee too, being italian, but can't resist some good Chai Vanilla Tea~
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