Mary Had A Little Lamb .... [KAI/HITSUGI] - ONE SHOT part 2 of 2

Jul 02, 2010 10:33


Title: Mary Had A Little Lamb (part two of two)
Chapters: One Shot
Author: Read more... )

par - kai x hitsugi, par - reita x aoi

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siseja July 2 2010, 18:59:32 UTC
you know
I enjoyed this to no end, really :3
it was lovable and you feel so sorry for poor Hitsugi xD
and still I also felt so much victory for Kai when he revealed that there was nothing at all Utada could do x]
you are indeed a talented writer

lol
and I loved the hunt :3

Also, imagining the bloody mess poor Hitsugi must've been
and despite you not describing just how painful that rape must've been, there was still much room for imagining....
*imagines*
...
ouch
*huggles Hitsugi*

but above all that
the part that I liked the very most, the whole orgasmic climax of this fic
that is
the VERY last line, at the bottom of the page...

HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSSSSSSSS 8D

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luna_no_koibito July 7 2010, 20:38:57 UTC
I am glad that came through, the sense of security that Kai was displaying through the whole questioning, which was justified ... by the fact that he had in control from the beginning, must feel horrible to realize that the people you thought were friends, are actually foes.

Well I am working on HOS, now so let me hurry up ne?

Thank you so much for reading, and keeping up with this! *gives you a fresh and clean Hitsugi* so that you can do whatever you want with him

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siseja July 8 2010, 20:41:31 UTC
yeah xD utter betrayal really stings....
it's a good thing I'm on Kai's side ^^

YOSH
HOS
HURRY (if you haven't already finished this as I finally managed to steal a computer xD still got two days left of camp >.<)

8D ....
how did you know Hitsugi's my very favorite Nighmare member? *squishhuggles*

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pooobaihr July 2 2010, 19:36:00 UTC
Im fine with second this time

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pooobaihr July 2 2010, 23:12:39 UTC
NYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYAN

*loves on Kai so much so he cant breathe*

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luna_no_koibito July 7 2010, 20:41:06 UTC
I think he would love that as well, might opt/force to maybe kill you .. depends on where you lol!

Thank you so much for reading, and keeping up with this! *gives you a fresh and clean Hitsugi* so that you can do whatever you want with him

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luna_no_koibito July 7 2010, 20:39:20 UTC
That is good, lol!

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hitsu711 July 7 2010, 18:56:41 UTC
UNF UNF UNF

There needs to be more of this, MOOOREEEE. ♥♥♥♥♥

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luna_no_koibito July 7 2010, 20:49:49 UTC
Aaaaaw thank you so much!
I am so glad that you sound excited abou tthis, this is my first time, writing somrhing of this kinda (^ ^" )

Thank you so much for reading, and keeping up with this! *gives you a fresh and clean Hitsugi* so that you can do whatever you want with him

YOUR USEPIC MADDE ME DIE! LOVED IT!

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hitsu711 July 7 2010, 21:07:24 UTC
Ah! Not a problem dear!
In fact I was considering doing some fanart. Would you like that? |D

ROFL IT SEEMED APPROPRIATE...some how xDD

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luna_no_koibito July 7 2010, 21:22:05 UTC
You flatter me exceedingly m(_ _ )m I would love that!
sorry for the 18th century talk, I am working on one of my fictions, which is written with that type of speech, so my mind is acting confused LOL (@ @" ) lol

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