Detour - Chapter 4 / Prologue + 7 + Epilogue

Feb 11, 2010 21:25


Title: Detour
Chapters: 4 / 7 + Epilogue
Author: Read more... )

fic - detour

Leave a comment

Comments 30

12thgrave February 12 2010, 03:04:33 UTC
wahhh~~~ DONT TELL ME ANYTHING BAD HAPPENS TO KAI KAA-SAN!
If it does, worse than what just happened, I might cry... cause now I'm so into what's going on cause I can relate in so many ways, DUN MAKE ME CRY KAA-SAN~~~ T^T

Reply

luna_no_koibito February 14 2010, 19:12:52 UTC
No baby nothing bad happens to him ... yet ... *sighs&

I am sorry musume-chan, I'll try and keep t as mildly painful as I can, though I can't promise much, becaue until the epilogue, it might be very angsty to tell you the truth.

I am so sorry that you had to relate to Yutaka in such a way (T T! ) and please feel free to cry in my arms ne, musume-chan?

Thank you for reading and commenting, I really appreciate it, and *allows you into the next Detour*. Enjoy (^ ^! ).

Reply


(The comment has been removed)

luna_no_koibito February 14 2010, 19:15:25 UTC
I am sorry baby *hugs* ... <<"

Yes he had, and that is probably one of the many saddest things of their story. And things just keep happening ne? Sometimes life just makes it so hard for you *sighs* ...

The next part is up baby ... ... that felt kinda sarcastc LOL ... <<"

Love you to? ... <<"
mewmew.

Thank you for reading and commenting, I really appreciate it, and *allows you into the next Detour*. Enjoy (^ ^! ).

Reply


lifeinaphantasy February 12 2010, 03:49:41 UTC
WHY ( ... )

Reply

luna_no_koibito February 14 2010, 19:23:34 UTC
Yeah ... that will certianly create a problem or two ne? And well the chapter is up so I'll let you read for your own eyes who he ran into ne?

Thank you I am glad you like it, and I like developing other caracther's as well, becasue I believe they actually help in understanding the main as well, so I think it important! *nods*

It makes me so flattered every time that epople are able to get such emotions from my writing thank you very much , and HAHAHAH even if it were to be his fiance, he wouldn't have a way to know, so no don't worry not her ... she is in Okinawa anyways ... but not sure if the fact that it wasn't her makes it better ( ... )

Reply


(The comment has been removed)

luna_no_koibito February 14 2010, 19:27:15 UTC
I am so sorry *tries her best to mend you heart*.

Yup those were in a way all signs of his paranoia is you want to put it like that, but paranoia is generated from somethign right? And I am glad I was able to make the subtle "something isn't right feeling" kind of creep on you as well LOL.

Gaaaah, yeah that scene, so hard to writ *headdesk* I feel for my Yutaka a lot, this is really not easy, and *hits muses on the head*

Thank you very much dear, whenever it gets right to the heart of my readers even if so sad it makes me feel accomplished m(_ _)m

Thank you for reading and commenting, I really appreciate it, and *allows you into the next Detour*. Enjoy (^ ^! ).

Reply


(The comment has been removed)

luna_no_koibito February 14 2010, 19:29:18 UTC
... yup ...

Wasn't? At a point when I reread my previous chapters, I almost felt like saying the same thing *headdesks*

Poor thing, AKira really didn't mean this, and he'll explain, I think this is a very unfotunate love story, where many things could have been prevented, but fear, and insecurity didn't allow it (T T! ).

And ... well ... just read *sadly headdesks*

Thank you for reading and commenting, I really appreciate it, and *allows you into the next Detour*. Enjoy (^ ^! ).

Reply


Leave a comment

Up