OH MY GOODNESS!!! This was so good!!!! WHAT ON EARTH HAPPENED TO YUTAKA????!!!! Gah I have to know!!! But I think I might have an inkling of an idea! But I shall wait and see.
This was just so amazing!!! I couldn't stop laughing after that scene with Die and Ruki's reaction to him. "Kyo said more than “Yo”, “Can I fuck you now?” *Dies from laughter*
Ruki was so cute with his little electrical part! XD Aw Kouyou actually showed up, that was sooo cute especially how shy Ruki became.
I loved Shinya's and Ruki's breakdown of that chick in the beginning, that was just too funny. "Magically straight" lol!!!
Wow, Ruki obviously doesn't know how to take the hint. I mean with all of those glares Yutaka kept sending him it was like he became a brick wall or something! XD
I'm soooooo excited for the next chapter!!! I can't wait to see how this unfolds and what the truth is behind Yutaka and Akira's past!
You'll soon know what happened to Yutaka no worries, it is kinda of mentioned on at the end of chapter 1, which is up, but well shown in chapter 2 (^ ^! )
Heheheh, I am glad it made you laugh, hope you cherish those moments!
Yeah, Kouyou is definitely the sweet, but "I don't play around" one of the series, where as Kai and Reita are both so stubburn *hits both muses*
Ahahaha, I just could imagine Shinya and Ruki having a convo, that cracke dme up as well LOL
Ruki is a very blunt person, but as I'll epxlain in 2, and you'll see a bit in 1, he doesn't do it on prupose ...(^ ^! )
I am so glad to hear you excitement for this, it means a lot to me, thank you very much m(_ _! )m. And gush thank you so much for the compliments!
Thank you for reading and commenting, I really appreciate it, and *allows you into the next Detour*. Enjoy (^ ^! ).
I KNOW BABY SORRY m(_ _! )m. [insert never-eding smooching?]
... I am just trying to love you babe.
Yeah Akira is very kind, and gently to our dear Yutaka, the man is a real gentleman when he wants [AND GOD TELL ME WHAT YOU THOUGHT AFTER YOU FINISH READING CHAPTER1!!!]
I HOPE it doesn't, and I am so close to givin into you begging all the times, but I willnot!
OMFG I LOOOOVE THIS!!! everything was written so beautifully i love how you describe ruki's expressions. ever so changing XDD
-Well .. yeah ...- seemingly bashfully spoke the shorter, catching Yutaka a bit off guard, given that blushing, and acting sort of cute AAAAAAAWWWW RURU CHAN~
a night stand didn't sound so bad after all, if it meant they weren't going to be alone for a while; it was an extremely sad conclusion, but it was their reality- thats so horrible.T.T i hope they find people that will love them for themselves and not their bodies T...T
(lol i'll stop quoting now since it takes too much time and i keep on getting distracted by kai chan <33
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WOW I AM SO HAPPY! YEEEY imouto likes it! Yeah Ruki is a secondary carachter, but I did want him to have personality as well, like all the caracthers in this story such as poor Die LOL
*sighs in relief* that part was so delicate, it took me forever, I am glad it turned out the way I had intended it to (^ ^! ) AND I AM SORRY I MADE YOU CRY! ABSOLUTELY NOT MY INTENTION m(_ _! )m
Rant as much as you want and thank you very much imouto!! Thank you for reading and commenting, I really appreciate it, and *allows you into the next Detour*. Enjoy (^ ^! ).
WOW Thank you very much! m(_ _! )m Aaaaw, *shakes hands with muses, they did a good job* AHAHAHA that is a nice reaction to our cute chibi ne? Glad you like Takanori' character! (^ ^! ) And more is already up ne~! (^ ^! )
Thank you for reading and commenting, I really appreciate it, and *allows you into the next Detour*. Enjoy (^ ^! ).
OH THAN KYOU SO VERY MUCH m(_ _! )m *honored* I am glad you seemed to find it interesting so far, really glad! HEHEHEEH glad you also liked the reference to roads, it pleases me when readers notice those details (^ ^!! )
Thank you for reading and commenting, I really appreciate it, and *allows you into the next Detour*. Enjoy (^ ^! ).
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This was so good!!!!
WHAT ON EARTH HAPPENED TO YUTAKA????!!!!
Gah I have to know!!! But I think I might have an inkling of an idea! But I shall wait and see.
This was just so amazing!!!
I couldn't stop laughing after that scene with Die and Ruki's reaction to him.
"Kyo said more than “Yo”, “Can I fuck you now?” *Dies from laughter*
Ruki was so cute with his little electrical part! XD Aw Kouyou actually showed up, that was sooo cute especially how shy Ruki became.
I loved Shinya's and Ruki's breakdown of that chick in the beginning, that was just too funny. "Magically straight" lol!!!
Wow, Ruki obviously doesn't know how to take the hint. I mean with all of those glares Yutaka kept sending him it was like he became a brick wall or something! XD
I'm soooooo excited for the next chapter!!! I can't wait to see how this unfolds and what the truth is behind Yutaka and Akira's past!
Amazingly brilliant and wonderful job hun!!! =)
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Heheheh, I am glad it made you laugh, hope you cherish those moments!
Yeah, Kouyou is definitely the sweet, but "I don't play around" one of the series, where as Kai and Reita are both so stubburn *hits both muses*
Ahahaha, I just could imagine Shinya and Ruki having a convo, that cracke dme up as well LOL
Ruki is a very blunt person, but as I'll epxlain in 2, and you'll see a bit in 1, he doesn't do it on prupose ...(^ ^! )
I am so glad to hear you excitement for this, it means a lot to me, thank you very much m(_ _! )m. And gush thank you so much for the compliments!
Thank you for reading and commenting, I really appreciate it, and *allows you into the next Detour*. Enjoy (^ ^! ).
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Thank you for reading and commenting, I really appreciate it, and *allows you into the next Detour*. Enjoy (^ ^! ).
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[insert never-eding smooching?]
... I am just trying to love you babe.
Yeah Akira is very kind, and gently to our dear Yutaka, the man is a real gentleman when he wants [AND GOD TELL ME WHAT YOU THOUGHT AFTER YOU FINISH READING CHAPTER1!!!]
I HOPE it doesn't, and I am so close to givin into you begging all the times, but I willnot!
*chuu~!* ILU2
I do don't I *snickers*
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everything was written so beautifully
i love how you describe ruki's expressions. ever so changing XDD
-Well .. yeah ...- seemingly bashfully spoke the shorter, catching Yutaka a bit off guard, given that blushing, and acting sort of cute
AAAAAAAWWWW RURU CHAN~
a night stand didn't sound so bad after all, if it meant they weren't going to be alone for a while; it was an extremely sad conclusion, but it was their reality-
thats so horrible.T.T i hope they find people that will love them for themselves and not their bodies T...T
(lol i'll stop quoting now since it takes too much time and i keep on getting distracted by kai chan <33 ( ... )
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Yeah Ruki is a secondary carachter, but I did want him to have personality as well, like all the caracthers in this story such as poor Die LOL
*sighs in relief* that part was so delicate, it took me forever, I am glad it turned out the way I had intended it to (^ ^! ) AND I AM SORRY I MADE YOU CRY! ABSOLUTELY NOT MY INTENTION m(_ _! )m
Rant as much as you want and thank you very much imouto!! Thank you for reading and commenting, I really appreciate it, and *allows you into the next Detour*. Enjoy (^ ^! ).
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Aaaaw, *shakes hands with muses, they did a good job*
AHAHAHA that is a nice reaction to our cute chibi ne?
Glad you like Takanori' character! (^ ^! )
And more is already up ne~! (^ ^! )
Thank you for reading and commenting, I really appreciate it, and *allows you into the next Detour*. Enjoy (^ ^! ).
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And very interesting! I loved it! x3
And the whole concept with the roads and everything...beautiful~
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I am glad you seemed to find it interesting so far, really glad!
HEHEHEEH glad you also liked the reference to roads, it pleases me when readers notice those details (^ ^!! )
Thank you for reading and commenting, I really appreciate it, and *allows you into the next Detour*. Enjoy (^ ^! ).
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