That's so good!!! When I first read the character list I was like Satoshi and Atsushi... I wonder what they'll be like together. But now I know!! And oh my goodness I really want to bash Atsushi's head in or something. I mean not even being there for your dying wife?! Aish... but you did say that nothing is ever what it seems so maybe Atsushi actually has a good reason... or I'm just reading too much into it and trying to make him a good person! XD
Either way the story is starting out fantastically! You are absolutely BRILLIANT!!! Ah, I just love it and that cute little Tomohisa... I was like "aw, stupid Atsu why can't you be like that with your own son?" lol. But I loved how Satoshi was able to understand and see a bit of himself in the younger child... that was just so powerful I guess is the word I'm looking for, because then you can understand a little bit more how painful and hard Satoshi's life has been. By being subjected to the press at such a young age... not being able to have a father or a mother anymore, but did he ever really have a father figure to begin with... or maybe something happened that changed Atsushi... hmmmm, so many questions! XD I just love it!! I can't wait for the next part, I'm so excited to see what happenes and who else is introduced!
Oh and I forgot to mention one more thing, I love you have Satoshi in the beginning, standing in front of the mirror analyzing himself and reflecting upon the past and how he did this and that in order to get Atsushi to notice him and try to get an actual living response from his "father" instead of this cold-hearted work devoted person. I mean I know he said he did it out of anger and rebellion but I just can't help but think that maybe among all of that he also just wanted his father to notice him.
Again you've done a wonderful job hun!! I shall wait patiently for the next chapter!!! ^-^
( !>_>) How does anybody reply to such an amazing comment ... *still very much speechless* ...m(_ _! )m.
I know, I felt like bashing the man myself as I was writing the whole thing imagine (^ ^! ). Yes, I am glad you read and acknowledged my A/N and most certainly thing aren't in great part like they seem. However, in cases such as this I can safely tell you without ruining anything that Atsushi is merely an overly ambitious man, so that is unfortunately, who he is *buu*.
The moment between Satoshi and Tomohisa, was definitely a delicate, and important one. It was meant as a "zoom in" into Satoshi's true character, and also in trying to understand how oppressively heavy everything in his mere sixteen years of life most have been, so yes, you got that right on point. I am very sure that Saotshi would have loved to have the relationship that Tomohisa had with his own father, no doubt. However, he will now have to be thankful to Tomohisa for a great deal of things ...
Awwwwwwwwww, thank you. It took me a while to decided how I wanted to beginning this Chapter, and actually begin the story ne, so I really appreciate your consideration *hug*
Thank you so much for reading, I really appreciate it gives you *A free day at the same hair-saloon Satoshi had gone to do his hair* FUN FUN FUN place! ... Next chapter up (^_^)
I can't believe I didn't notice this!! Grrrr... evil e-mail not notifying me of these things! DX I think I need to dispose of my e-mail provider cause they aren't doing a very good job! lol.
Anyways, thank you so much!! I'm so honored and happy to know that you liked my comment!! ^----^
Lol, well don't hurt yourself... just make Atsushi hurt himself! XDD Really? *cries in corner* Bad bad Atsushi. Just strap him to a chair and make him watch care bears all day! XD
Hmm... I see. What kind of things??? Hmmmm so INTERESTING!!!!
That's so good!!! When I first read the character list I was like Satoshi and Atsushi... I wonder what they'll be like together. But now I know!! And oh my goodness I really want to bash Atsushi's head in or something. I mean not even being there for your dying wife?! Aish... but you did say that nothing is ever what it seems so maybe Atsushi actually has a good reason... or I'm just reading too much into it and trying to make him a good person! XD
Either way the story is starting out fantastically! You are
absolutely BRILLIANT!!! Ah, I just love it and that cute little Tomohisa... I was like "aw, stupid Atsu why can't you be like that with your own son?" lol. But I loved how Satoshi was able to understand and see a bit of himself in the younger child... that was just so powerful I guess is the word I'm looking for, because then you can understand a little bit more how painful and hard Satoshi's life has been. By being subjected to the press at such a young age... not being able to have a father or a mother anymore, but did he ever really have a father figure to begin with... or maybe something happened that changed Atsushi... hmmmm, so many questions! XD I just love it!! I can't wait for the next part, I'm so excited to see what happenes and who else is introduced!
Oh and I forgot to mention one more thing, I love you have Satoshi in the beginning, standing in front of the mirror analyzing himself and reflecting upon the past and how he did this and that in order to get Atsushi to notice him and try to get an actual living response from his "father" instead of this cold-hearted work devoted person. I mean I know he said he did it out of anger and rebellion but I just can't help but think that maybe among all of that he also just wanted his father to notice him.
Again you've done a wonderful job hun!! I shall wait patiently for the next chapter!!! ^-^
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I know, I felt like bashing the man myself as I was writing the whole thing imagine (^ ^! ). Yes, I am glad you read and acknowledged my A/N and most certainly thing aren't in great part like they seem. However, in cases such as this I can safely tell you without ruining anything that Atsushi is merely an overly ambitious man, so that is unfortunately, who he is *buu*.
The moment between Satoshi and Tomohisa, was definitely a delicate, and important one. It was meant as a "zoom in" into Satoshi's true character, and also in trying to understand how oppressively heavy everything in his mere sixteen years of life most have been, so yes, you got that right on point.
I am very sure that Saotshi would have loved to have the relationship that Tomohisa had with his own father, no doubt. However, he will now have to be thankful to Tomohisa for a great deal of things ...
Awwwwwwwwww, thank you. It took me a while to decided how I wanted to beginning this Chapter, and actually begin the story ne, so I really appreciate your consideration *hug*
Thank you so much for reading, I really appreciate it gives you *A free day at the same hair-saloon Satoshi had gone to do his hair* FUN FUN FUN place! ... Next chapter up (^_^)
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Anyways, thank you so much!! I'm so honored and happy to know that you liked my comment!! ^----^
Lol, well don't hurt yourself... just make Atsushi hurt himself! XDD Really? *cries in corner* Bad bad Atsushi. Just strap him to a chair and make him watch care bears all day! XD
Hmm... I see. What kind of things??? Hmmmm so INTERESTING!!!!
You're welcome *huggles*
Hahah *enjoys free day at hair salon*
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