Yes, finally a new chapter! :D:D Yutaka is such an asshole! :@ (I was about to write Yukata) XD But awwww, Ruki and Uruha, they are so sweet together. n_n I wish they would get together for real! =) But who knows!? Maybe they are!! ;P Yes! Now I want to read about the beach trip! ^^ But I'm concerned about monday. Don't let anything too bad happen! >< :S Thank you!
Yutaka, well he is the typical asshole, who doesn't understand other reasons, or doesn't try to understand other's reasons, and is only blinded by what he thinks his RIGHTEOUS porpouse (T_T;;).
Yeah they are a very nice couple, a little belligerent want but still nice nonetheless. LOL!
The beach trip we'll be relaxing and fun, they really deserved it and as for Monday, well we'll have to wait and see I am afraid.
Thank YOU for commenting, I really appreciate it and gives you a sky full of *hugs and kisses*
....M'kay. I'm going to be totally honest here. I love the story and all, but what is with Courteny? I mean, is she really necessary to this story? X___X
It's your story and you can do what you want, but sticking such a random female character in is really annoying for me, the reader.
(^_^) I appreciate your honesty, I am still a newbie writer, thus this type of comments help me in my progression. Thus, I am going to explain the reason of Courtney.
I understand that her presence could cause distress, considering how this fictions usually go, but since I am trying to keep mine as close to reality as possible, I have to have her for (especially not in 1998 LOL!) the majority of people weren't homosexual, and Aoi being kind of the popular guy in school, would have a comapanion. ANd being that she is black, it served at the begining to point out, how the homosexuality problems, was considered slightly worse than an interrecial relationship (which is a whole topical by itself but I had to mention it (^_^!))
I hope my reasons are a little clearer, and I am sorry it annoys you, but I hope it will not remove too much from the rest of the story (^_^!)
But as I said, I appreciate your honest comment, and thank you for it! gives you a *hug and kiss* from the heart.
^__^ You're welcome. I really like your writing lots. It's just from my point of view, things like that can feel like some sort of "self-insertion" and that's what bugs people. It happens a lot in fan fiction. Sometimes the author even puts her friends in and that's what happens. But I understand your point now. ^___^
aghdhyfadhsh!! They're soo cute. *___* Why are they soo cute? WHYY TELL MEEEE??!! >////< I love how their relationship had progressed, and that bit with Kai was a wittle troublesome but at least it fleshes out the more possessive, paranoid Uruha which is just, ugh, cuteee. ♥
AHAHAHAHHA! Yes, I most admit that they are probably one of the cutest couples I've wrote about (Shou and Ruka being first in HOS ...) and yeah the bit with Kai, will be a bit troublesome, but they will face it together right? ...will they? we shall see! LOL!
Working on part two, and thank you sooooo much for commenitng, really appreciate it and gives you a world of *hugs and kisses*
It's probably because I always see Uruha as this mainly, defiant kid, that's why it kinda ticks me off seeing him in fanfics as the residential slut of theGazettE. >____> It just doesn't fit him, imo and you did well in characterizing him, and Ruki as well.
And I think I have an idea about Kai's case but I don't want to ruin things for you so I'll just sit here and wait like a good girl till you post the rest of the chapter. xDDD
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I guess you get my special kiss this time *smuch*
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Yutaka is such an asshole! :@ (I was about to write Yukata) XD
But awwww, Ruki and Uruha, they are so sweet together. n_n
I wish they would get together for real! =) But who knows!? Maybe they are!! ;P
Yes! Now I want to read about the beach trip! ^^
But I'm concerned about monday. Don't let anything too bad happen! >< :S
Thank you!
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Yeah they are a very nice couple, a little belligerent want but still nice nonetheless. LOL!
The beach trip we'll be relaxing and fun, they really deserved it and as for Monday, well we'll have to wait and see I am afraid.
Thank YOU for commenting, I really appreciate it and gives you a sky full of *hugs and kisses*
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Thank you so much for commenting hon, really appreciate it gives you a sea of *hugs and kisses*
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*goes off to read it*
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I'm going to be totally honest here. I love the story and all, but what is with Courteny?
I mean, is she really necessary to this story?
X___X
It's your story and you can do what you want, but sticking such a random female character in is really annoying for me, the reader.
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I understand that her presence could cause distress, considering how this fictions usually go, but since I am trying to keep mine as close to reality as possible, I have to have her for (especially not in 1998 LOL!) the majority of people weren't homosexual, and Aoi being kind of the popular guy in school, would have a comapanion. ANd being that she is black, it served at the begining to point out, how the homosexuality problems, was considered slightly worse than an interrecial relationship (which is a whole topical by itself but I had to mention it (^_^!))
I hope my reasons are a little clearer, and I am sorry it annoys you, but I hope it will not remove too much from the rest of the story (^_^!)
But as I said, I appreciate your honest comment, and thank you for it! gives you a *hug and kiss* from the heart.
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You're welcome. I really like your writing lots. It's just from my point of view, things like that can feel like some sort of "self-insertion" and that's what bugs people. It happens a lot in fan fiction. Sometimes the author even puts her friends in and that's what happens.
But I understand your point now. ^___^
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They're soo cute. *___* Why are they soo cute? WHYY TELL MEEEE??!! >////< I love how their relationship had progressed, and that bit with Kai was a wittle troublesome but at least it fleshes out the more possessive, paranoid Uruha which is just, ugh, cuteee. ♥
Can't wait to read the second part! ^^;
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Yes, I most admit that they are probably one of the cutest couples I've wrote about (Shou and Ruka being first in HOS ...) and yeah the bit with Kai, will be a bit troublesome, but they will face it together right? ...will they? we shall see! LOL!
Working on part two, and thank you sooooo much for commenitng, really appreciate it and gives you a world of *hugs and kisses*
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And I think I have an idea about Kai's case but I don't want to ruin things for you so I'll just sit here and wait like a good girl till you post the rest of the chapter. xDDD
And omgz, now it's up to five chapters! \(^ ^)/
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