The perfect first date - Reita/Kai - one shot

Jul 26, 2009 23:19


Title: The perfect first date.
Chapters: one shot.
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par - reita x kai

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k435y July 27 2009, 06:48:04 UTC
Is he arguing...with his brain? O_o

Killer looks … check.
“Somehow can't get off you” cologne, and “gush I so want to kiss you” minty fresh breath … check. LOL!

Condoms and lube …che-
Woo woo, hold you horses there lover-boy! … I thought we decided you would have left those home. LOL!!! Too funny.

allowing the stupidly smiling bassist to walk passed him Awwww... LOL.

also urgently trying to keep a slightly twitching Reita junior in place LOL! Reita Jr.

Hmm .. from behind … looks good …
AKIRA! LOL! *dies from laughter*

inwardly thanking the creators of the English language for allowing the word apron and ass to start with the same letter LOL!

swift cloth tossing … I never lose at that LOL! I'm lost now. I'm not sure who's POV it is anymore. XD Is it all Reita's?

LOL!!! Reita and his brain.... Way too funny and cute. This was awesome. Thanks for sharing. =D

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luna_no_koibito July 27 2009, 15:00:27 UTC
Yup my dear, he is having a good old debate with his brain (^_^!!) LOL!

Gotta look cool .. and romantic?LOL!

My horny Reita .. ahahah .... unavoidable!

Reita really doesn't know what he is doing ... smiling is always the best technique in those occasions! LOL!

LOL! Reita jr will have his share ... don't worry Reita!

What else could Reita be thinking looking at Kai from behind ... nice denim BTW ...LOL!! AKIRA!!!

YEY ENGLISH!!!

YEAH ... I apologize it is instincts, i WENT BACK AND CORRECTED IT m(_ _)m sorry!!!!

Thank you so much for the compliment! and of course for commenting LOAD of *hugs and kisses* dear thank!

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fairydrop July 27 2009, 07:34:54 UTC
XD I liked this so much!

You know what was the best thing? You wrote that the last one wasn't the best week, so instead of angst you wrote some humour... I like this attitude of yours!

Thank you again! I thought somewhere during arguing with himself he will say something stupid... but it was enough when rationality lost to instinct...

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luna_no_koibito July 27 2009, 15:02:15 UTC
WOW I am so happy you liked it!!! thanks alot!

Yeah it still a rather buuuu week but hey, if yo can find a way to laugh, why not, right?

Yeah ... rationality can only go so far

Thank you so much honey! this is my first one-shot you comment means a lot to me! tons of *hugs and kisses*

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shizukasou July 27 2009, 10:36:54 UTC
Utterly cute and funny. Nice job. ;D

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luna_no_koibito July 27 2009, 15:02:52 UTC
Thank you very much, and thanks for commenting as well, I appreciate it!

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aliceninefreak7 July 27 2009, 11:09:08 UTC
Double personality Reita! That's cute, funny, cool and totally amazing at the same time! Good job! Your writing style was fresh and new, I haven't read anything quite like this! :)

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luna_no_koibito July 27 2009, 15:04:02 UTC
I am really truly honored, your comment just gave me a big boost right there!

I am glad you liked it and I thank you so much for commenting! gives a mountain of *hugs and kisses*!

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kwahzutah July 27 2009, 11:30:18 UTC
Nyaaa! This had me squealing and awwing, it's soo kyoot! Yet another piece of luuurvely writing from the master. ^_^

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luna_no_koibito July 27 2009, 15:06:22 UTC
Aaaaaw! glad I didn't disappoint you, I was getting ready to dig my grave, and of course as a good master I would have taken my slave with me! LOL!

Jokes aside .. thanks for commenting hun love you and gives you 1000 (yeah just a 1000 can't spoil u now, can I ?) of *hugs and cookies*

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kwahzutah July 27 2009, 15:29:31 UTC
*gobbles up both hugs and cookies*

That would have been a mighty cramped coffin there. Unless you weren't planning on using one 0_o

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luna_no_koibito July 27 2009, 15:49:54 UTC
Woman! I got it all covered, it is a very comfy coffin for two! LOL! no worries ... *evil laughter*

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