I was waiting for this and it's perfect *___* When I read your reply on my last comment I was like "O.O...English is not your first language?!" that blew me away because your writing is absolutly admirable <3
The chapter was very, very interesting. The paranoid Kai was kind of funny XD (does that sound mean?) And Takerus action in the carriage...I liked it *lol* I'm curious if he will continue with that :3
And poor little Kai...his worst nightmare is part of the Hayashi family... I wonder if Reitas opinion on Kai-kun (And I have to say I laughed so hard, as I imagined Tora and Saga following Reita like good dogs)
I am so glad to hear that! And thank you so much for the compliment, I most admit that writing in English is easier than speaking it (but I think that this holds for every language), I really appreciate it (-_^) !
And that is exactly how I wanted him to sound! His paranoia had to sound funny (so it doesn't sound mean at ll, but perfect!) Oh Kai needs to brace up for Takeru is not going to give him a brake that easily ... (・＿・；）
Reita ... HMMM ...Well we shall see, shall we ?... (=^__^=)! And I most admit I am starting to get affectionate to the two dogs myself, it almost feel like I can see them running around, maybe if I get dogs I'll name them that ... (Poor Saga and Tora though ...LOL!)
Thank you so much for commenting, and I greet you back with *hugs and cookies*
I like Yutaka’s letter, the writing looks so flawless. Those letters give the atmosphere of 18th century, it also tells about what happened to him in previous part and his hopes which really helps to understand the character. Poor boy… so scared of Akira. Don’t be too mean with Uke, don’t let the blond terrorize him too much ^_^
Another surprising guest, why do I always surprised of them. She… he…(*confused* oh well anyway) feats so well.
The scene where Uke meets Kazuhiro looks so heart warming. I wonder what kind of relationship Kazuhiro have with his brothers, especially with Akira. I hope the older one isn’t too harsh with little blonde. So, Kazuhiro-chan is ignoring brother’s fiancée? And here I was thinking that he’s a saint))) And the part with Akira was so hilarious.
Yeah his diary entries serve exactly to that purpose to get to know Yutaka better. He is in a whole new place, and he feels his life threatened by the first person he meets ... it left a little trauma there LOL! Believe me I definitely would never do that to Kai, but Reita, I won't even try to stop him ... his scary ... LOL!
I love inserting random "guests" like that, I find it amusing.
Kazuhiro is really a good willed person, he really but Ayaka is really not in everybody's good eye ... LOL! And will soon see about Kazuhiro (-_^)!
occasionally interrupted as Yasuno tried to jokingly defend himself to the bewildered and amused face of his fiance LOL!
-Such a boring subject ... - puffed Takeru, as he absentmindedly looked outside the open window LOL! I agree. =X
the younger blonde, who was in front of him, trying to stand up as he held both hand on the edge of the window, and slowly brought his head out of it
as he the apprentice fell back to his seat, with the younger in his arms He's so cute! LOL. ...Or just plain suicidal. =/ And that was sweet of Kai. XD
he had spotted a pleased grin on the face of the younger directed towards him, and it wasn't the type of pleasantness of a person, who was glad they had been help, but it almost felt like a sensual smile *grins like a fool* I mean...what? =X
Oh, my Takeru...what a conniving little tease. LOL! Hm...I'm beginning to suspect that Ayaka is with Yasuno mainly because of his accomplishments. =/ And Takeru amuses me. LOL.
he lives to favor the cases of the regular citizen over wealthier ones Really? The
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WOW. I am so flattered ... I am not even sure how I am supposed to reply to this, but I will, and to each single line (^__^): Here we go! (Man I'm happy
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Are you sure english is not your first language??? maaaan I love your writing!!!! It is perfect xD~~ And Thee history is great *O*~~ I wish I had such ideas u.ú"~~ Well, I loved the paranoid Kai xD it was pretty funny *O*~~ xD And how he thought Bou was a girl! XD~~ I LOVED IT, when I read: "Then a blonde lady wearing a long black, white and pink dress..." I immediately thought "BOU-CHAAAAAAAN \o/" And I was right xD~~ Well @_@ nobody likes Ayaka?? XD" I liked her @_@ I think she1s funny o.o somehow~~ Well xD I'm sooo excited about the history line *O*~~ I want too seee Shou-kun soon x.x"~~ Oh and Takeru is great!! 8D Pleasee updatee soon *O* PS: I didn't forget about your other fic xD" I'm just without time to comment Ç_Ç"~~ PS2: God I'm soo curious! XD
Yup, my first language is Italian (^_^)! Thank you for the compliment I really appreciate it! (And believe me it's still a long way from perfection (-_^)!)
I am glad you seem to like the story so far, and yes paranoid Kai is absolutely funny, and I am glad you feel the same way, and Bou is absolutely a cutie!
I guess they just see Ayaka as an intruder, they have always had themselves only you know (and I personally have nothing against Ayaka, I like her music)...
Don't worry you'll soon get to see your Shou=kun (I know how much you like him (-_^) ...!) and I'll try my best to update as soon!
PS: Don't worry! I am very glad you are still reading, I am trying to get this to a good amount of chapters so that I can keep them going on at the same pace.
PS2: Good, because I feed on you curiosity LOL! (-_^)
yay! update :D it's quick! i'm happy~...happy~~ *dances* -I some time don't seem to use this - added Takeru, pointing at his head no takeru...you are clever! yes, clever is the word for you *nodnod* akira is sooooo...mean! well, at least to kai (but i love to see paranoid and scared kai, so thanks to you, akira! bad bad me XD) hmm...i want to know more about kazuhiro now.. he's rather..complicated? and of course kazamasa! yay! i can't wait~~...*fangirling*
thanks for writing and sharing ^_^ you really made my day <3
Yeah Takeru is clever indeed, and Akira is a first hand person, he didn't had the best experience with poor Kai unfortunately, and he is very impulsive, however, that doesn't justify his behavior, certainly ... but of course, there is more too that (hard to reply without giving out a lot!!)
and about Kazuhiro and Kazamasa you might actually get what you want (following the outline of my story ...), and yeah he has a lot bottled inside ...
It makes me very happy to hear that I made you day, even though I am not sure I should take the merit, I really appreciate it
Thank you so much for commenting! *hugs and kisses*
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I was waiting for this and it's perfect *___*
When I read your reply on my last comment I was like "O.O...English is not your first language?!" that blew me away because your writing is absolutly admirable <3
The chapter was very, very interesting.
The paranoid Kai was kind of funny XD (does that sound mean?)
And Takerus action in the carriage...I liked it *lol*
I'm curious if he will continue with that :3
And poor little Kai...his worst nightmare is part of the Hayashi family...
I wonder if Reitas opinion on Kai-kun
(And I have to say I laughed so hard, as I imagined Tora and Saga following Reita like good dogs)
I'm really looking forward to chapter 2 =^o^=
greetings <3
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I wonder if Reitas opinion on Kai will change
so that's it XD
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And that is exactly how I wanted him to sound! His paranoia had to sound funny (so it doesn't sound mean at ll, but perfect!)
Oh Kai needs to brace up for Takeru is not going to give him a brake that easily ... (・＿・；）
Reita ... HMMM ...Well we shall see, shall we ?... (=^__^=)! And I most admit I am starting to get affectionate to the two dogs myself, it almost feel like I can see them running around, maybe if I get dogs I'll name them that ... (Poor Saga and Tora though ...LOL!)
Thank you so much for commenting, and I greet you back with *hugs and cookies*
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Thank you so much for quick update ^_^
I like Yutaka’s letter, the writing looks so flawless. Those letters give the atmosphere of 18th century, it also tells about what happened to him in previous part and his hopes which really helps to understand the character. Poor boy… so scared of Akira. Don’t be too mean with Uke, don’t let the blond terrorize him too much ^_^
Another surprising guest, why do I always surprised of them. She… he…(*confused* oh well anyway) feats so well.
The scene where Uke meets Kazuhiro looks so heart warming. I wonder what kind of relationship Kazuhiro have with his brothers, especially with Akira. I hope the older one isn’t too harsh with little blonde. So, Kazuhiro-chan is ignoring brother’s fiancée? And here I was thinking that he’s a saint))) And the part with Akira was so hilarious.
Can’t wait for more ^_^
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Yeah his diary entries serve exactly to that purpose to get to know Yutaka better. He is in a whole new place, and he feels his life threatened by the first person he meets ... it left a little trauma there LOL!
Believe me I definitely would never do that to Kai, but Reita, I won't even try to stop him ... his scary ... LOL!
I love inserting random "guests" like that, I find it amusing.
Kazuhiro is really a good willed person, he really but Ayaka is really not in everybody's good eye ... LOL! And will soon see about Kazuhiro (-_^)!
Thank you for commenting!! *hugs and kisses*
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-Such a boring subject ... - puffed Takeru, as he absentmindedly looked outside the open window LOL! I agree. =X
the younger blonde, who was in front of him, trying to stand up as he held both hand on the edge of the window, and slowly brought his head out of it
as he the apprentice fell back to his seat, with the younger in his arms He's so cute! LOL. ...Or just plain suicidal. =/ And that was sweet of Kai. XD
he had spotted a pleased grin on the face of the younger directed towards him, and it wasn't the type of pleasantness of a person, who was glad they had been help, but it almost felt like a sensual smile *grins like a fool* I mean...what? =X
Oh, my Takeru...what a conniving little tease. LOL! Hm...I'm beginning to suspect that Ayaka is with Yasuno mainly because of his accomplishments. =/ And Takeru amuses me. LOL.
he lives to favor the cases of the regular citizen over wealthier ones Really? The ( ... )
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maaaan I love your writing!!!! It is perfect xD~~
And Thee history is great *O*~~ I wish I had such ideas u.ú"~~
Well, I loved the paranoid Kai xD it was pretty funny *O*~~ xD And how he thought Bou was a girl! XD~~ I LOVED IT, when I read:
"Then a blonde lady wearing a long black, white and pink dress..." I immediately thought "BOU-CHAAAAAAAN \o/"
And I was right xD~~
Well @_@ nobody likes Ayaka?? XD" I liked her @_@ I think she1s funny o.o somehow~~
Well xD I'm sooo excited about the history line *O*~~
I want too seee Shou-kun soon x.x"~~ Oh and Takeru is great!! 8D
Pleasee updatee soon *O*
PS: I didn't forget about your other fic xD" I'm just without time to comment Ç_Ç"~~
PS2: God I'm soo curious! XD
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I am glad you seem to like the story so far, and yes paranoid Kai is absolutely funny, and I am glad you feel the same way, and Bou is absolutely a cutie!
I guess they just see Ayaka as an intruder, they have always had themselves only you know (and I personally have nothing against Ayaka, I like her music)...
Don't worry you'll soon get to see your Shou=kun (I know how much you like him (-_^) ...!) and I'll try my best to update as soon!
PS: Don't worry! I am very glad you are still reading, I am trying to get this to a good amount of chapters so that I can keep them going on at the same pace.
PS2: Good, because I feed on you curiosity LOL! (-_^)
Thank you for commenting *hugs and kisses*
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it's quick! i'm happy~...happy~~ *dances*
-I some time don't seem to use this - added Takeru, pointing at his head
no takeru...you are clever! yes, clever is the word for you *nodnod*
akira is sooooo...mean! well, at least to kai (but i love to see paranoid and scared kai, so thanks to you, akira! bad bad me XD)
hmm...i want to know more about kazuhiro now.. he's rather..complicated?
and of course kazamasa! yay! i can't wait~~...*fangirling*
thanks for writing and sharing ^_^ you really made my day <3
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Yeah Takeru is clever indeed, and Akira is a first hand person, he didn't had the best experience with poor Kai unfortunately, and he is very impulsive, however, that doesn't justify his behavior, certainly ... but of course, there is more too that (hard to reply without giving out a lot!!)
and about Kazuhiro and Kazamasa you might actually get what you want (following the outline of my story ...), and yeah he has a lot bottled inside ...
It makes me very happy to hear that I made you day, even though I am not sure I should take the merit, I really appreciate it
Thank you so much for commenting! *hugs and kisses*
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