"Something Wicked" for zephre

Mar 28, 2008 21:15

Title: Something Wicked
Rating: PG
Possible Spoilers/Warnings: Mild DH-spoilers (minus epilogue). Minor Angst.
Summary: (Neville/Luna) The students return to Hogwarts after the war, but Luna soon senses that a new evil is afoot. With Neville's (reluctant) help, she decides to get to the bottom of it.
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fic, neville/luna, spring 2008 exchange

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peskywhistpaw March 29 2008, 01:37:52 UTC
Ooh! I really love the tone of this; it's so mysterious, and it's exciting, too! And I love that it isn't strictly romance. Rather, it's got a bit of action/adventure... Very refreshing. :)

I had a feeling that it might be Bellatrix behind all of that, but until the end, I had no idea how she could be!

Anyway, lovely story. I rather wish there were more. ♥

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zephre March 29 2008, 02:25:17 UTC
oooh, this is just lovely. great post-War blindness, an extra bonus I hadn't anticipated, and such an adorable development of Neville's feelings.
thank you so much! I love it!

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i_am_girlfriday March 29 2008, 05:36:59 UTC
Wonderfully written! The plot was really rich and I loved the details about the pumpkins and the blackbirds. You really captured what it would be like to be a student at Hogwarts after the war.

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shiiki March 29 2008, 12:22:47 UTC
Oooh, I love this! Neville/Luna in a romantic sense usually isn't my cup of tea, but you won me over with your progression here.

And then you had romance not as the main focus, but more of a side dish - with a really exciting mystery driving the plot forward. I was so very intrigued from the start, and I just wanted to keep going to unravel the strangeness of it.

I like how there is still an element of the unknown even when we reach the end. Like we arrived at the ending without fully understanding every step along the way. That is just perfect for Luna.

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