Gift of Fate Prologue (1/?)

[luminare91]

Summary: Oliver has been missing for two years, ever since his boat went down in a sudden storm. Chloe is still grieving for him. What will it take for her to move on and live her life again? What happened to Oliver? Will he ever come back? And who's behind the mysterious disappearances in Star City?

Rating: PG-13 for the most part, however there

Comments

[hsmrmae]

OMG Great start!!!! I hope we see Chloe and Ollie interaction soon!!!
And please.....
UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!

[luminare91]

Lol. Thank you. And stop shouting. I'll get this updated soon. :)

[hsmrmae]

Ahahaha lmao sorry I am just very eager....

[luminare91]

lol. i don't blame you. in fact it's kind of flattering

[isdon_isgood9]

That is so heart breaking :( Also I can't believe you posted this so quick, I haven't even had a chance to sit down and review to part 18 of the other one just yet. I read it really quickly yesterday before running off to do what I had to do :D

Anyway, the whole dream is so moving, the way he tells her to keep believing that he's out there and the way she keeps trying to hold onto him. I love that she's created this world in her dreams where she can be with him. It broke my heart when dream!Ollie walked away from her and she was calling out how much she loves him. It was so sad. And then for her to wake up, in bed, alone, and curl up in a ball and start crying, well it was truly heartbreaking.

Anyway I loved it, even though it's heartbreaking, I hope Oliver does come back soon, and I can't wait to see where you take this next :D Good job!

[luminare91]

Well, I might have been working on the sequel before I even finished posting the last few chapters of Twist of Fate.

I was trying to convey just how hard being apart was for Chloe. I was also trying to convey a little bit of hope that he would come back for her. If I'm lucky that came through.

I'll try to get the next chapter up asap.

[isdon_isgood9]

You did, don't worry, I believe there's hope, I'm not sure Chloe believes it though, then again I'm easier to convince than Chloe ;D

[luminare91]

well that was kinda what I was going for. Chloe's giving up, but the reader isn't

[niffer2001]

OMG! Im sooooo excited that you have started the sequel already. Squeeeee! Hmmm wonder what part Tess will play in this story. Ohhh cant wait for the next chappie.

[luminare91]

Tess will be a rather important part of the story, but that's all I'm saying at this point. :P

[abarbiestory]

seriously......

your kindda great i hope you know this! the way you started this was so...it was just...*takes a deep breath*... it was awesomely poetic. the conversation brought me to tears. the vision was clear and the writing beautiful. I can't wait for the next chapter!

[luminare91]

Wow. I'm not sure what to say to that. I'm glad you liked it. I was going for a really emotional dreamlike scenario. I'll get the next chapter up soon!

[poetgirl925]

I know I said it before, but starting with Chloe's dream was just great. It really set the mood of the fic - we can see how much pain Chloe has been in, how guilty she feels for still being alive when she thinks Oliver is probably dead. Then having Dream Oliver walk away, her calling after him and then waking up alone and crying.... wow. It sets the mood and we get a sense of the tension and uncertainty in her life. Great job, looking forward to more :)

[luminare91]

Thank you! And thanks so much for letting me bounce ideas off of you. It's so helpful!