Near to You (2/?)

Jun 28, 2012 00:49


So sorry for the delay...I'm just really excited for this story and I want it to be just right. If you read, please review!

Title: Near to You
Rating: M
Summary: They both need someone. Then they found each other.


Read more... )

story near, catagory: smut

Leave a comment

Comments 24

lexiesloan June 28 2012, 10:53:20 UTC
Holy fuck, this was wonderful. I love how you showed in separate sections just how lonely Mark and Lexie both are and how everyone treats them like shit. It's too true. They have no one else. The door fuck was hot - as promised - but I really love the scene in his hotel room. Just lying there, Lexie talking and Mark listening. In S4, Mark did not do things like that - not until Lexie - and the scene just makes me smile. I loved this update, Kim. I hope you are enjoying your weeks off from work and I hope you have another update coming!

Reply

lumifan99 June 28 2012, 13:29:20 UTC
I am so blushing right now. I'm really glad you liked this. Mark and Lexie are so very lonely. Right now, the only time Mark doesn't feel like that is when he is with Lexie. The same goes for Lexie ( ... )

Reply


lussy83 June 28 2012, 13:37:29 UTC
Wow, I loved that Mark and Lexie talked and let it all out and didn't hide after the it was a one-night stand thing.

Yay, they want to see where this thing will goe and where it will bring them.

Reply

lumifan99 June 28 2012, 14:04:27 UTC
Lexie was really angry with Mark when she found out he lied to her about not living in Seattle. But Lexie is kind of angry in general. She's mad at the world and she is still in the greiving process for the loss of her mom. The pain of her death is till really fresh for Lexie. Then at the same time she is dealing with her dad's drinking problem and Meredith being so cold towards her. This is where Mark comes in. I think right now he is the only one to make her feel any kind of happiness. The same goes for him. Addison totally screwed him over and Derek is being a dick, so he needs someone like Lexie.

I was a little nervous about the ending, just because I don't know if it's going to fast. But my thought was, they feel this really strong conection, and just can't help it.

Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to review!

Reply


aquatica82 June 28 2012, 17:49:59 UTC
Lexie's is kind of angry in the world, her life has turned upside down and Mark was there and his "lying" was the last drop but he understands.

I liked that you showed us just how much lonely they both feel and yay for Mark wanting to see where this thing with them is headed. And I totally understand his desire to keep it secret for the time being, the "hospital" doesn't have the best opinion for him plus Lexie has enough trouble inthere to be the center of the gossipmill, too.

The hotel scene was wonderful, we see a different side of Mark and it's nice, because behind those walls that he's built to protect himself lies a wonderful man!!!

Are you gonna follow the show episodes here?

Reply

lumifan99 June 28 2012, 21:50:59 UTC
Mark and Lexie being lonely in S4 was something I never thought they explored enough (well...at all). So this is my attempt to show it.

Mark is kind of confused because of the way he feels about Lexie. He doesn't actually know her, but he really wants to. This is different for him.

It will follow some episodes. I know for sure it will follow Thatcher's drinking, Nick, and Addison coming back.

Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to review!

Reply


magickell June 28 2012, 19:49:05 UTC
I loved it. You set it up so perfectly to show how each of them are outcasts and black sheep and just lonely. You can see how they find solace in each other and not just the sex (which is AMAZING). Great job!

Reply

lumifan99 June 28 2012, 21:57:48 UTC
Mark and Lexie were total outcasts in S4. I'm really excited to explore that. They have def found solace in one another. The are enjoying the sex, but they aren't sure if there is anything more between them yet. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reply


fais2688 June 28 2012, 21:11:00 UTC
Like I said on FFN, I loved this chapter. So happy you're updating again :)

Reply

lumifan99 June 28 2012, 21:58:35 UTC
Thanks again for reviwing Faith! I'm happy that you are happy! :)

Reply


Leave a comment

Up