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lucy_locket

Fic: On The Outside Looking In

Jan 01, 2009 23:26

I wrote fic! For the day one prompt at redismycolour. I don't know if I'm gonna do every day, but I really want to at least try when the prompts inspire me. This one I saw and had no initial ideas, started to write and it just sort of...flowed? It's not very good, but a contribution is a contribution right?

Title: On the Outside Looking In
Rating: PG I suppose, ( Read more... )

redismycolour, ianto/gwen, fic, jack & jones

Comments 56

jackieville January 1 2009, 23:55:11 UTC

Lovely! *happy sigh*

lucy_locket January 2 2009, 00:02:48 UTC

Awww, I'm so happy you like it!

sazzat January 1 2009, 23:59:05 UTC

Aww this was cute babe. Loved how you wrote Jack's perspective. Loved your Jack fullstop actually :)

lucy_locket January 2 2009, 00:02:23 UTC

Aww really? *cuddles* Thanks babe. It means a lot to me that you like it. The Ianto/Gwen not too much for you? Hehe.

sazzat January 2 2009, 18:56:14 UTC

To be completely honest, I'm still not convinced by Gwen/Ianto, so reading it was a bit...it wouldn't be something I'd write, but that doesn't mean it wasn't a great fic and who am I to argue with how you read things and your imagination, it is your fic :) Plus, I can actually see Gwen being the type of person to drag someone onto the ice with her ;) So it was a lovely story and I loved Jack's mellowness.

And I would read anything you wrote bb.

cherry_soup888 January 2 2009, 00:00:48 UTC

Yay so pretty! I love it hun, gorgeous fic.

lucy_locket January 2 2009, 00:06:29 UTC

Thank you so much, sweetheart. And in my heart it's so called Ianto Jones and his frozen cocksword.

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lucy_locket January 2 2009, 01:11:21 UTC

*cuddles* thank you so much, darling. Really means a lot to me that you like this.

starlight30 January 2 2009, 00:32:10 UTC

Eeeee! That was lovely! Your Jack, Gwen and Ianto are just perfect. I can totally see Gwen dragging Ianto onto the ice like that, hehe. Very cute. And the kiss was gorgeous! ♥

Also, I love your descriptions! You have a really nice writing style. :D

lucy_locket January 2 2009, 01:15:41 UTC

Awww *hugs* thank you so much, darling. Really means a lot that you like this. I'm glad you think my characterisation is okay. I was worried about it.

starlight30 January 2 2009, 01:34:08 UTC

I think it's spot-on. *loves* I want to see a scene like this in series 3 now. XD

(Also...I'm working on my top 10 moments, but it's proving more difficult than I anticipated, haha. ♥)

lucy_locket January 2 2009, 01:39:49 UTC

Aww thank you darling *blush*

And you are so not the first to say that to me, hehe. Good luck with it babes.