Undercovers (2/6)
In which Cara and Kahlan infiltrate a Mord Sith temple to try and retrieve a very ~powerful~ amulet. Will they be able to fool Cara's former sisters for long enough to complete their mission and get out unscathed? Or perhaps the more important question: will Cara be able to resist Kahlan in full Mord Sith leather?
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I cannot describe how hard I was laughing, just now, at the sex scene. YOU DID GREAT! I literally shrieked "WHAT?! as Cara said, “Get between my legs.” -- and then my eyes scrolled down to see, just below, that Kahlan said “What?" exactly like I just had, and they I DIED LAUGHING. lol NO LIE!
I was clapping and laughing like a dork full of squee for like 10 full minutes, obnoxiously annoying my upstairs neighbors. I'm sure they think I'm insane. I just try not to shriek out the best lines that are actually *p0rny,* in my gales of laughter! xD
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OH, and: You are awesome.
You're officially being added to my 'awesome writer friends' list. Hope you don't mind. :D
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Tell your neighbors I said sorry! Haha.
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OH G-D...(rereading &) *still dying*: Cara let out another lewd string of groans, getting progressively louder as her hips canted rhythmically against an imaginary mouth. Kahlan flushed deeper at the sounds Cara was making, and she couldn’t help but feel a bit flattered at the imaginary pleasure Cara thought her capable of.
Maybe the best line. Maybe my fave one, anyway. SO bad! lol SO GOOD!!!! hahah
*LOVE*
[This might have been the 10 minutes' worth (of laughter) section/part...]
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That not!sex scene fried my brain and made me laugh like a loon, simultaneously. ~Pretending to be a couple~ is one of my favourite tropes and you are CERTAINLY making the most of it. :D
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Haha I'm so glad you were into it! I think ~pretending to be a couple~ might be my #1 favorite trope. I watch a ridiculous amount of tv in which that not only happens on screen, but can easily be plausible in fic. YAY FAKE DATING.
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