Busted (pt 4) [Castle/Beckett]

Jun 21, 2012 00:12

busted - part four (Ryan and Esposito)
The story of how Castle and Beckett get totally busted by literally every person they know.
castle/beckett - pg-13
a/n: Also known as: How Everyone Finds out Castle and Becket are Banging.

Ryan has a list. )

fic: busted, fic: castle, fic: castle/beckett

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steph0202 June 21 2012, 04:55:00 UTC
OF COURSE RYAN HAS A LIST.

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shimmeryshine June 21 2012, 18:59:28 UTC
RIGHT? OF COURSE. Oh ryannnnn :')

Thank you for reading!

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corellianjedi June 21 2012, 04:55:52 UTC
OH THIS IMMEDIATE FAMILY.

I am unable to textually render how much I love this. And the four of them.

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shimmeryshine June 21 2012, 18:59:54 UTC
kfasfad THIS IMMEDIATE FAMILY INDEED. :')

So glad you liked it!

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anonymous June 21 2012, 04:58:16 UTC
Oh, ew.

You are the worst and this is the worst and I cannot wait to see how this all really happens but it should happen like this because yes.

Perfect as always. Lol always.

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shimmeryshine June 21 2012, 19:00:20 UTC
I love it when people tell me I'm the worst :'))))

GLAD YOU LIKED IT!

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sadpie June 21 2012, 05:12:15 UTC
Oh gosh. I have so many wonderful things to say about this. I love the style you chose to write in with the four different sections. I love Ryan and Espo making the list and being all CIA about it. I can TOTALLY see that happening on screen. I just felt like this was so in character- it was literally like watching an episode, it was so believable.

Beckett throws back her last swig of coffee, grimacing around the bitter liquid in her mouth. Ugh not enough. She’s tired today, the backs of her eyelids like sandpaper as she tries to focus on the murder board, tries to make things make sense instead of daydreaming about her pillow. Or his pillow. Mmm his bed is so much more comfortable than hers -

No.

No.

Work. Work. Murder.

Castle?

Loved that bit. ♥

Excellent job!

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shimmeryshine June 21 2012, 19:01:26 UTC
I was playing outside of my usual box, style wise here a little bit, so I'm glad you liked how it turned out! And ahhh it is always the greatest to hear it sounded like an actual episode, so THANK YOU for saying that, and for reading :)

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sparkles_mouse June 21 2012, 05:20:23 UTC
YES!!!!!!!!!!!!! You capped off my night great ( ... )

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sparkles_mouse June 21 2012, 05:21:12 UTC
The plastic of his lid is warm against her mouth, from him or his coffee, she doesn’t know, but the low hum she releases as the dark liquid passes through her lips, over her tongue and down her throat is so appreciative she can almost feel him canting toward her on instinct alone. - This bitch even makes drinking coffee arousing. She's also coming under the bleachers (that's what he said ( ... )

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shimmeryshine June 21 2012, 05:28:51 UTC
So what I gathered from this, jess, is that you would really, really like to do some things under the bleachers.

Or something?

Will there be cupcakes down there, because I am game if there will be cupcakes.

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sparkles_mouse June 21 2012, 05:32:23 UTC
Bring treats was code for: BRING ME SOME CUPCAKES WHEN YOU GET DOWN HERE.

But I guess if I'm throwing this bleacher party I can bring the cupcakes.

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