When You Just Get A Character Wrong
A few days ago I wrote a pretty ok (imo) Ryan/Luke fic that took place after the beach scene in the pilot. After last night's episode I've realized that I gave Luke way too much credit in the fic. Luke just doesn't come off as the introspective kind. He may be bright, maybe (since he can't come up with any other insults that bitch or queer), but not introspective. Dammit!