Comments | lucklessforhim: fic: bottle it up

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fic: bottle it up

Dec 25, 2011 21:14

title: bottle it up.
author: lucklessforhim
pairing: Jesse/Rachel
word count: ~3400
rating: NC-17
summary: Rachel and Jesse as rival showchoir directors.
notes: Written as a Christmas gift for my best friend, androgenyus! I was listening to 'bottle it up' by Sara Bareilles and that is really the only explanation for the title. I'm pretty sure it doesn't even make sense.

( started as a flicker meant to be a flame, skin has gotten thicker but it burns the same... )

fic pairing: jesse/rachel, fic, fic: glee

Comments 6

fistsandfangs December 26 2011, 04:16:02 UTC

I loved this! I could tell by the summary that I would. Love how their relationship is still affectionate and teasing after so long. Thanks for this!

juicylover09 December 26 2011, 05:29:19 UTC

Thank you so much for sharing this, it was a wonderful end to my christmas. Although I enjoyed many lines of this story my favorite was, Because, like an attention deprived Pomeranian, he’s right on her heels, following after her.
I have a Pomeranian and she behaves exactly like that.

trivialidades December 26 2011, 15:18:43 UTC

This was amazing! JFC, i love them so much.

nicalyse December 28 2011, 20:37:09 UTC

I love Jesse all cocky and filthy like this, and I really enjoy the way Rachel plays off him like that. It seems an odd thing to say about smut, but your writing in this is lovely as well.

pippazx December 31 2011, 06:50:17 UTC

With all the Klaine and Brittana fics around, I haven't read a St. Berry fic in a really long while. I really liked reading about older Jesse and Rachel competing- I really liked your take on them. Thanks for sharing!