Fic: Then I See You

Mar 12, 2011 23:06

Title: Then I See You
Author: lucklessforhim
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 1250
Summary: I know, everything is not as it's sold, but the more I grow the less I know.
Disclaimer: I do not own Supernatural or any of it's characters and I am making no money writing this. It's just for fun.
Note: Next installment of my post-BUABS series with Jo on the road with the Boys ( Read more... )

fic verse: believing, fic pairing: dean/jo, fic, fic: spn

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beyond_wonder March 13 2011, 05:42:47 UTC
I LOVED IT!

This was freaking perfect! *I* so needed to read this today - it was written wonderfully, and my heart broke into a million pieces. I loved the smoking thing - seeing Jo at her lowest - and Dean pulling her back. I love how they came together and how damn sweet he was to her. I can't wait to read more. It really is fantastic!

... and what album is the 'Try' song from? I have most of her songs, and the title sounds familiar?

Please post more soon.

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lucklessforhim March 14 2011, 03:37:29 UTC
THANK YOU!

Oh, I'm so glad you liked it. I really loved this one and it almost wrote itself, which is always a good sign. I'm excited for you to see where this is going for them!

"Try" is from the album Folklore. It's so good. This is the video.

I might be posting more in a few days, definitely by the weekend! :D

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lucklessforhim March 14 2011, 03:46:44 UTC
Hmmm, that's as good as anything I've come up with so far (which is nothing!) and I'll definitely be adding it to my brainstorming list.

I hope to finally have a title for this series by the next installment, but coming up with titles has always been the hardest part of writing for me. Some things title themselves, but most don't.

Thank you so much for the suggestion!

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sxymami0909 March 13 2011, 05:45:10 UTC
This was really great hun. I think you got into their heads nicely and I like your take on the situation.

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lucklessforhim March 14 2011, 03:48:29 UTC
Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I'm so glad you liked the way I handled this and them. ♥

(Also: Oh, goodness. That icon makes me tear up.)

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luckytohaveher March 14 2011, 10:51:30 UTC
That was INCREDIBLE. I love to see Jo breaking down and Dean reassuring her. This series is so perfect.

I wish we'd had this on show: what it's like for beginner hunters. Just to think Dean and Sam have been doing this since they were little... breaks my heart.

Wonderful work, bb!

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lucklessforhim March 15 2011, 02:22:53 UTC
Thank you, sweetie! I'm glad you liked this.

This series is going to be...something unlike anything I've ever posted before. I'm really trying to add some depth to Jo that we didn't get on the show. We'll see how it works out. So far, people seem to like it.

Thank you so much for reading! I'm planning on posting more in a few days, since I'm on break right now. :-)

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paolamhc April 5 2011, 02:09:08 UTC
That was freaking awesome. Loved it.

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