Harry Potter Fanfiction: Of Purebloods and Parties

[lucie_fanfix]

“I can’t believe you chose white, Cissa. White is such a babyish color!” Bellatrix Black snarled at her youngest sister. Narcissa, who had been admiring her own reflection the mirror just moments before, gave her sister a snooty look, turning up her dainty nose. But when she turned back to the mirror, the excitement had gone from her eyes and

Comments

[oh_thatsgreat]

Awww cute. I greatly enjoyed that :]

[lucie_fanfix]

Thank you! This was the first time I'd tried to focus on one of the Black sisters, so I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[anna_sg1]

Aww... the fluffy goodness! *swoon* I loved it!

This was so Bella! *evil grin*
Bellatrix’s lips curled into a cruel smile. “Of course. That’s because Mother and Father haven’t been able to betroth you to anyone.” She bent down and hissed in her sister’s ear, “Nobody wants you.”

I can so imagine this whole thing happening. :)

[lucie_fanfix]

Thank you! I'm glad you found my Bella believable...it was creepy to write such an evil character. Another line I enjoyed writing for her was "Do my bidding, odious child!" :-) Thanks again for the nice review.

[anna_sg1]

it was creepy to write such an evil character

Hehe, you had to dive into your evil side, ha? *grin* Well, it worked great.

[lucie_fanfix]

Thank you. Mwah ha ha ha ha! *Lightening, thunder*