FIC: other things the road to hell is paved with [15/?]

[lucia_tanaka]

My Wonder Beta totally saved this chapter from extreme sucking, like, three times as I was writing it. If you aren't jealous of me for having the best beta in the world, you should be. ♥

Title: other things the road to hell is paved with [15/?]
Rating/Warnings: PG-13, potentially R or NC-17 later.
Summary: Another way the Baron rose to power.

Comments

[kaishiro15]

Holy. Pissed off Marcone is PISSED.

Ack. I can literately feel that the end of Harry and Susan's relationship is coming soon.
I like how you compared that with the Alphas relationship and how they try to cheer him up.

Also, blowing up that guy's PDA. Priceless. :D

Oh no. The White Council is threatening Harry again. :( I hope Harry doesn't get any serious problems from this. He just wants to help get rid of the supernatural threats to the people. Like Susan. I guess the reaon they both get along is that people don't believe in them.
On the other hand, if they do try something on Harry, they're going to have to deal with Marcone. :D

By the way, it may just be me, but did you get some of your ideas for this fic when you read grenegome's prompt of Harry and Marcone teaming up against the supernatural threats and generally being awesome?

Can't wait for the next chapter. I would also like to say excellent work to grenegome for betaing this so quickly. :D

[lucia_tanaka]

Of course he's pissed. No one gets to tease Harry but him and Hendricks. 83

I met grenegome the Wonder Beta in that LJ post when I mentioned her prompt had inspired me to write something inspired by but very different to her idea. So, yesh, a little. 83

INDEED, SHE IS VERY FAST. I'm forever thankful to her. ♥

[lucia_tanaka]

Hahaha, I know, I know. Sorry, I am evil. I did say it was OoC Theatre though! 8D

Clearly tomorrow is when Harry's house gets firebombed.

Nope. 8D

[lucia_tanaka]

Harry. He's fucking 6'9" and would look TERRIBLE. It'd be hilarious.

Oh, it is irony. Just not about that. The next two or three chapters are going to be a bit crazy for him, the poor lamb.

[thought_goddess]

"It's Mr. Dresden. I am John's wizard."
... *cough* Ohhhh Harry.

Basically this story just keeps getting better and better.

[lucia_tanaka]

Yeeeeeeep, he doesn't even think about what he's saying. 83

As, thank you. 8D

[spazlady2002]

Oh my god! Marcone is pissed!! Thats not healthy at all....Does Harry have any idea that they are kinda going down the whole boyfriend route? To have dumped Susan for John, I can so see that.

Awesome chapter!!

[lucia_tanaka]

Yes, he's pissed. He's incredibly territorial. You take what he sees as his and then insult his wizard? :falcon PAAAWNCH: Or something.

And consciously, no, Harry has no idea.

[robanybody]

God, I love this series so much. I've been reccing it all over the place because it's so well written and plotted, and the characterizations are perfect and the dialogue makes me so happy. I love everything about it!

[lucia_tanaka]

Aw, thank you! I'm so glad you like it. ♥