15 Annuals, Chapter 7: The Part Where Old Plots Are New Issues

[luchia13]

Told you it'd be out soon~

ALSO THIS CHAPTER IS DEDICATED TO WAFFLES. NO, THAT'S NOT ANYONE'S SCREENNAME. IT'S THE FOOD. GO WAFFLES GO. ♥

Title: Fifteen Annuals With Her Gay Guardian Glitch (15 Annuals); CHAPTER 7, AKA The Part Where Old Plots Are New Issues
Rating: NC-17!
Summary: Who needs Roboparents when a Queen's got an Advisor-Ninja to take

Comments

[invderlava]

::squeaks in JOY:: I KNEW CONSTANTLY REFRESHING MY FRIENDS PAGE WOULD WORK MUAHAHAHAHA!! ::goes to read::

[luchia13]

I have just enough time before falling unconscious to go WHAT THE HELL HOW THE FUCK DID YOU DO THAT?!

*and yep, has now konked out*

[invderlava]

I was scary!determined to read this as soon as it was posted. :3

Hehehe. Sweet dreams! I hope they're Glitch/Cain!porn-filled! :D

[invderlava]

Heeeeee. ::bounces:: :D Another wonderful chapter! And I can't love it enough how well you're incorporating the actual miniseries into this story. Everything fits so well! XD

>.> <.< I caught a lot of typos:

Instead he got a quiet, solemn, “The I’ll get him, Tomo.” - Then I'll get him...

“What-” he began, only to see Glitch clinging two him, two fingers already inside of himself. “…holy-” - clinging to him...

Glitch whimpered, kissing him, and with a hard htrust, arder than any of the others, Glitch’s head immediately whipped back. - a hard thrust, harder than any others...

<>Two little princesses dancing in a row,
Spinning fast and freely on their little toes.
Where the light will take them, no one ever knows,
Two little princesses dancing in a row… - forgot the "i" in the HTML. It screwed up the rest of the dream sequence.

There was one other one in the last section but dammit if I can't figure out where it is. >.< Eh, I'll reread this tomorrow and find it for ya. XP

[puffballzeri]

Uuuhhh... I love how Cain was all like "Omigod, I don't understand gay sex!"

And like, all the deep stuff was cool, too.

Stop glaaaaaaaaaaring at me. I'm half asleep and just made an ass out of myself for you, baby.

[puffballzeri]

Ha ha, I just noticed some spelling errors n' shit during the sex scene. Typing one handed, baby?

[luchia13]

Actually, I think I was. I wrote that part after I came in from shovelling and was chugging like three mugs of hot chocolate. Wanna point 'em out to me so I can fix it in the morning? I'm...well, pretty dead right now, what with you keeping me up allll night~ ♥

Naughty vixen.

[luchia13]

Fixed 'em! TAKE THAT, YOU PINK ICON OF HUMPING! VICTORY! \o/

[candacestls]

Wow, every chapter I think this can't get any better and it does. I wish I could make you those damn waffles! Good work.

[luchia13]

Oh, you guys flatter me so. ♥

And I'd chalk the "getting better" bit to me having a LOT more planned out near the end than the beginning. I actually have like an OUTLINE and stuff, unlike for the previous five chapters! :D

*muches happily away on ze waffles, by the way. Thanks for the offer, though! Mmmm, waffles...♥*

[tyrical]

So how excited was I to see this update this morning. In a word: Very! I loved the blending of the fairy tales/stories. I felt bad for DG when she first found out how the witch escaped in this story nothing has changed. I feel for Glitch and I hope that DG can prove Glitch wrong and she can save her sister.

[luchia13]

I'd almost feel bad for everyone in this story if it weren't so friggin' fun to write. And IRONICALLY it was only going to be eight chapters but now it's...more. XD

And I know that EVERYONE says not to tell people this, but it DOES have a happy ending! Mostly!

I have no idea why I love torturing Azkadellia so much. First I give her a not-cousin to freak out about for what, eight years? And now her mom's all "GUESS WHAT? YOU GONNA GET STORM'D! :D". Plus the dreams are just...not helping her. At all. Poor posessed Sorceress. ♥

...also I think I spelled conscience wrong like four times in the crossposting and the summary and so on. And yet I'm not going to change it. Is that bad of me?

[tyrical]

Nope it's not bad at all! :)
Torture Az away. I think Glitch has had more in the way of torture than Az ever had!
Yeah! Happy ending! Me like-y!

[luchia13]

...well, yeah, but Glitch kind of does that obnoxious "HAY LOOK I CAN TORTURE MYSELF OVER THERE :D :D :D" thing and JUMPS RIGHT INTO IT. He is SUCH an idiot for a genius, I swear. *pets the poor ninja*

[prongs_padfoot]

I seriously need to not love this fic as much as I do. But then, I'm pretty sure my life would suck. *Heheh*

I think I've lurked through the other chapters, but have decided to come out of the closet and express my flaming joy at Making Cain top, but Glitch still being seme. \O/ Yay!

Anyways, I love this, and might not lurk so creepily in the future, might. *shifty eyes*

and maybe my comments will also make sense...

[luchia13]

Aww, thanks~! AND YOU'RE A LOVELY NON-CREEPY LURKER :D

I really, really find it funny that Glitch has to top Cain into topping. I just...o you guys. ♥

ALSO I want to thank you again for making such beautiful, beautiful Jeb icon bases. I feel bad about how I'm butchering them, but omg I LOVE THEM. ♥ ♥ ♥

[prongs_padfoot]

Aww...

I'm just so in love with top!Glitch. Seriously, your Glitch is just so awesome at it...*sounded mildly creepy*

I'm glad you liked them. And you didn't butcher them! They made me giggle!

[luchia13]

...honey, I threaten people with crowbar beatings on a nearly-daily basis. You do NOT sound creepy. Stop thinking you do! You're gonna make me get the crowbar if you do.

And I don't know WHY nobody thinks Glitch would top! It drives me mad, I swear. Maybe it's the fact a hat goes on top of a zipper-head or something stupid like that.

Yay giggles~! ♥