[mekakuni] Memories of the Future ch.7

[lucathia_rykatu]

Memories of the Future
chapter 7: #4 our distance and that person

Disclaimer: I do not own Mekakushi no Kuni.
Pairing: Namiki/Kaichou
Notes: for 30_kisses theme #4 our distance and that person
Archive: lj / ffnet
Words: 1396

-----chapter 7: our distance and that person-----

True as Masahiro had predicted, two scouts approached Kaichou's younger

Comments

[geniusgirl]

I have no idea how I missed this but yes! Yes, yes and more yes because the "lovey-dovey eyes" is ♥

Ok, so that wasn't quite eloquent but I did enjoy it. I like the way Masahiro is coming around, slowly but surely. Kaichou kinda spoiled the moment though. Hmph, thinking about Arou at a time like that. Honestly!

But it was really well-written, as usual, and I'm glad the siblings are making things better between themselves especially with the teasing XD.

I'll be honest and say that you're right that there was something a bit more...raw? choppy? about this chapter than the others but it's nothing to be disappointed by. It's barely noticable (I just noticed cuz I'm seriously fangirling this story and you mentioned it) so no worries :)

[lucathia_rykatu]

Like I've said before, I love your comments. ♥

It's been awhile since the previous chapter, so this chapter was probably pretty easy to miss! Come to think of it...I haven't updated this fic over at ffnet yet either. ^^;;

Hehe, I do love writing about Junya. :D

I tend to delve into Masahiro's head more than this (heh, like in the previous chapter), but somehow, I think the style of this chapter is a bit different than usual...more influenced by some of my other fics, most likely, since it has been awhile since I've written for this fic. -_-;; I'm not too great with writing conversations either, and yet somehow this chapter is full of it!

Hee, you make me giddy for fangirling this story!