[Legend of Sun Knight] fic: When You Fall, I'll Pick You Back Up (oneshot)

Jun 15, 2014 19:33

Title: When You Fall, I'll Pick You Back Up (oneshot)
Fandom: The Legend of Sun Knight
Words: 1,393
Summary: When you fall, Child, I'll be here to pick you back up. Set during V7. Neo and Chasel go out on the battlefield to protect their students.
Notes: Happy Father's Day. Here's the promised father's day fic, egged on by 100thangel, as mentioned in the ( Read more... )

the legend of sun knight, fic: when you fall, fic type: oneshots

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LUCATHIA-SAMA!!!! Thank you so much! 100thangel June 16 2014, 05:41:08 UTC
EEEEEEEEEEEE!!! You actually wrote it, I’m sooo happy! I remembered it was Father’s day right before I had to go to work and all I could think of on the commute was whether or not you’d write a fic for it (or if you even remembered). I hope you and your family had a magnificent Father’s day! (My family celebrated on Saturday instead ‘cause one of my brothers and I had work ( ... )

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Re: LUCATHIA-SAMA!!!! Thank you so much! lucathia_rykatu June 16 2014, 07:15:52 UTC
Father's Day rolled around, and just like Mother's Day, fic writing happened very last minute. XD; But it happened! \o\ Not a cutesy one like I thought it'd be though, when I first got thinking about it last month... I just felt this pressing need to explore Chasel's and Neo's thoughts about their students dying. And Chasel's reaction to Neo losing his arm. -___-;; (*throws all the reactions together hoping it will make a coherent fic ( ... )

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Re: LUCATHIA-SAMA!!!! Thank you so much! 100thangel June 17 2014, 00:05:54 UTC
Haha. I feel so inferior. All you have to do is throw stuff together and it becomes an amazing fic.

Oh! I love basketball! My school has a pretty good boys team. We have four campuses all over the state and we hosted our first ever Battle of the Campuses this year. We won which was really surprising.

You usually write in first person, I should’ve been able to tell write away (but I was too excited and forgot).

We only know that Chasel lives in Leaf Bud. I was wondering if any of the others did too.

That sounds interesting. I usually picture all the teachers and students having a get-together and everyone questioning Neo about his arm. Then Grisia feels so guilty that he gets Neo drunk and has his way with him (I don’t mean that in an impure way).

I… I NEED to see that! Oh gosh~

Isn’t it actually good that it’s already passed? This leaves more time to think and translations would have covered their introduction. It really makes me look forward to next year!

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Re: LUCATHIA-SAMA!!!! Thank you so much! lucathia_rykatu June 17 2014, 02:45:21 UTC
No, no, it still took a long time to wrangle into shape. *flops* But I guess I like that I don't have to agonize too much over oneshots... not too much planning required! (Unlike chaptered fics... I don't even know with my chaptered fics. They go nowhere)

I am terrible at basketball. We had a match at school the other day, against the students. I'm very glad I didn't join. I would've been demolished. |D;; Your team sounds pretty strong!

I like imagining that several of them live in the city! At least we know the 38th gen will all live there, haha.

;adj;as;dfa I wonder how much it takes to get Neo drunk...

Yup, yup, now a whole year to think about it. XD; (But it will still only get written just before the date rolls around, haha)

Oh, and ETA, before LSK, I rarely wrote first person, haha. Getting to write 1st person is pretty fun though. I feel like other fandoms judge people for it. I started off writing 1st person with my very first fics but transitioned away from that to third person... and now I'm back where I started. XD;

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I haven't even read this yet and I already /hate/ you fhaystshilffe June 16 2014, 06:18:24 UTC
SO I DO HAVE TO EAT YOU ok time to be late for work again ahaha BUT I NEED TO READ THIS NOW

I haven't even started reading but I'm already crying tbh
deep feels for Neo
HUARGH CHASEL'S POV
sobs
ARGH this is so sweet
Papa Chasellllllllll
whines
/the Teachers having parental feelings/
ARGH
I am suffering
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Neeeeoooooooooo QAQ
I already had too many angsty headcanons/scenes about this time skip why are you doing this to me
I hate you
vent your frustrations on undead to your heart's content like never before
/NON-BLOOD-RELATED FAMILY RELATIONSHIPS/

Ok now I've read this and I still /hate/ you
your fanfics are the greatest
my heart hurts

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Re: I haven't even read this yet and I already /hate/ you lucathia_rykatu June 16 2014, 07:26:21 UTC
NOOOOooooooo you will get a stomachache. Here, have this blueberry instead! *throws it at you* And no, don't be late to work!

Papa Chasel is the best. (Why are you so awesome, Chasel) Since I've already put Lesus through the wringer several times, now it's Chasel's turn right. just you wait, Hungri and Carol

This time skip is so perfect for fanfic. I really want to write it out with Adair as the lead All the angst and feels, seriously. What are these knights doing to me! (It's not my fault! It's theirs!)

Don't worry, Chasel and Neo will be here to pick up the pieces for you, ahhhhhhh.

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Re: I haven't even read this yet and I already /hate/ you fhaystshilffe June 16 2014, 16:55:52 UTC
*devours blueberry too* Too late, already was |D Only by like five minutes though. Nothing new! *coughs* (I don't think my bosses mind but I might be making a bad impression on my co-worker, whoop)

I'm having too many feelings about Chasel lately and then you just go and write both a cake chapter AND a oneshot about him basically. Huargh. Then again it is good because Chasel needs some love from me too CHASEL-NII-SAMA PLEASE BECOME PART OF MY JUDGEMENT KNIGHT FAMILY gemme Hungri and Carol I badly need fics about those two

Adair is the best Do you see now why I can't call them anything but dumb. |D DUMB KNIGHTS HOW DO YOU DARE HURT ME SO. How do you dare make me love you so much I cry way too much about your struggles. Give me all the fanfic I live off fanfics between translation updates. *melts on the floor*

*snuggles close to both Chasel and Neo*
seeing my children hurt makes me hurt
and everyone's my child I have adopted them all
let me hug all of you

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Re: I haven't even read this yet and I already /hate/ you lucathia_rykatu June 17 2014, 01:19:06 UTC
Is blueberry your favorite flavor? |D;

Chasel is only ever mentioned in the main storyline, but gosh, is he quite a character. (I love writing him)

(Now that I have a bit more free time, I can finally get the translations updates going for this month. |D;;;)

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ext_2634116 June 16 2014, 09:10:06 UTC
I don't think its is messy at all. In fact, it is one of the best, if not the best fanfic of LSK I have read so far. Keep up the good work!

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lucathia_rykatu June 16 2014, 18:11:15 UTC
Aw, thanks! It felt disjointed to me, especially since I was trying to cover three different reactions (Chasel's reaction to Lesus's death, his reaction to Neo's loss of his arm, Neo's reaction to Grisia's death), so it jumped around in time. But I hope in the end it was clear that the time frame is actually when they're out on the battlefield fighting the undead, and that Chasel was remembering what led up to that point...

Thanks for reading. ♥

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THANK YOU! anonymous November 18 2015, 08:30:14 UTC
I was always sad by the fact that the united teachers were only mentioned in one line. Of course, it was Grisia's POV, so there couldn't much be done about it. Yet I always wanted to have more about the 37th generation, about how they reacted to everything. And I wanted to know what happened in those six months.
You were able to give a bit of it and even made me clench my heart every so often, thank you so much! I would love to read so much more about 37 but thank you so so much for granting a little bit of that wish!
And it wasn't messy at all, it was heartfelt and so much appropriate for the things that were happening during that time in the story ...
- Moony

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Re: THANK YOU! lucathia_rykatu November 19 2015, 03:41:28 UTC
Aw, thanks! I'm glad this works. I really enjoy even the slightest mention of the teachers and the vice-captains. Their dynamics are great. The half year period is rich with exploration possibilities too, like what the teachers, the other Twelve Holy Knights, the vice-captains, and Roland were doing.

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