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[1/2 Prince x Legend of Sun Knight] fic: Invincible, that is the Legend - Chapter 10

Mar 09, 2014 00:19

Title: Invincible, that is the Legend - Chapter 10
Fandom: 1/2 Prince x The Legend of Sun Knight
Words: 4,033
Summary: On their way to finish the Dictator, the Execution Squad's "invincible battleship" crashes, separating everyone, landing them on foreign soil in the LSK world. "Those people you killed..." "Does it faze you?"
Notes: Invincible ( Read more... )

fic type: longfics, the legend of sun knight, 1/2 prince, fic: invincible; that is the legend

Comments 20

Invincible anonymous March 9 2014, 17:19:20 UTC

I am beyond excited that you FINALLY got around to writing anything. I've enjoyed everything that you've written so far. I hope the next chapter is Sunshine vs. the Sun Knight or Gui/Wicked or the follow up for this story because I wonder how Storm is going to explain Kenshin's hair tie. It'd be interesting to see how you would describe them trying to draw pic on the ground or do hand motions/sign language to somewhat understand each other. Or are they gonna have to hang out in the fishing village until the Storm Knight settles things there? Or will he ship them off with an envoy perhaps? Or will Lolidragon make her appearance with Yulian? Or Wicked's little brother? Even though you are critical of your writing, its always really good and very entertaining. So please keep up the great work that you do that is inspired by the great Yu Wo. I'm sure she would enjoy reading your stories. And i hope that you can write a short about female warrior. The originals or something like that. Thanks again for brightening my day!

Re: Invincible lucathia_rykatu March 9 2014, 21:32:46 UTC

It feels good to finally update this fic! I wasn't very satisfied with the chapter, but I was slightly more satisfied by the end, and an update is better than... no update, yeah? (I hope!) Thanks for the vote of confidence. :'D;; Heh, without any convenient translators, Storm, Fox, and Wolf aren't going to have a very easy time communicating, are they? At least, they're hopefully well versed in body language...

I am very eager to return to Sunshine and Sun, though Lolidragon and Yu Lian have also been clamoring for attention! As well as Ming Huang! Gui and Wicked are still wandering around by themselves too, one of the farthest groups from the rest. But we'll probably see the Leaf Bud City crew before the rest. So much to write, haha.

I would love to write something for Female Warrior sometime. :)

Invincible 10 anonymous March 9 2014, 18:24:31 UTC

I reread the story and thought maybe a Storm Pov would be good(small recap of the current chapter) and also for some reason i thought that if Loli and Yu Lian were in Moon Orchid and had an encounter with Mike the Son of the God of War that might be interesting. Or maybe the intro for the Kenshin trio to the Church and the other knights like how Hell knight might ask Kenshin to spar or watch Doll fly with her wings. Or Prince's brother react to the sanctuary of light/Earth Knight's reaction to so called womanizer? Thanks alot your fan, Lazula.

Re: Invincible 10 lucathia_rykatu March 9 2014, 21:38:48 UTC

I was quite tempted to have a Storm POV here in this chapter! Though somehow the chapter turned out to be shared between Wolf and Fox (when I usually try to stick to one POV as much as possible per chapter). Wolf and Fox just gave me so much trouble that they shared the chapter instead, haha, since neither of them wanted to carry the chapter all by themselves.

How did you guess Lolidragon and Yu Lian's whereabouts? I haven't even hinted at where they are! :O Anyway, very good guess...

Thanks for reading and commenting, Lazula! :)

Re: Invincible 10 anonymous March 11 2014, 17:13:14 UTC

I really enjoy you're stories. Especially since it takes a month or more for PR to translate the LSK chapters. So your stories are like a quick fix when i'm in need of more LSK. Thank you so much for this update and all the ones to come. As for Loli and Yu Lian, i just thought that might be really interesting to see. So i'm glad i guessed right and i can't wait. It crossed my mind that you might write a short on all the emo's like Ice Knight vs. Kenshin vs. Cold Fo x vs. Hell Knight (i know Roland really isn't an emo but the's quiet and reserved but also very bad a**!) Just a thought. Sorry i'm to lazy to log in so i don't show up as anonymous. Lazula

Re: Invincible 10 lucathia_rykatu March 12 2014, 04:30:49 UTC

Hahaha, a scene between all the stoic people? There definitely won't be much talking involved. XD; (Hey, no need to worry that they can't understand each other's language! Then again, Kenshin can understand everyone...)

Had given up hope.... anonymous March 9 2014, 21:55:12 UTC

I had given up hope for this series... *tears*

You just brightened my day. Don't know which one I'm looking forwards to more,
this one or Bittersweet Sweetness.

Don't give up on either of them. I prohibit you to do so >:(

Re: Had given up hope.... lucathia_rykatu March 9 2014, 22:36:50 UTC

I'm glad to have brightened your day! ♥ I haven't given up on this story... At least, that wasn't my intention. Sorry it took so long... (I had to reread the story myself, haha, to make sure I had things straight)

Only two parts left of Bittersweet Sweetness. I really hope I can wrap that up soon. It will be nice to finish at least one long LSK fic. :'D;; I love longfics, but I'm truly quite terrible at timely updates... I'm really thankful to everyone who has been faithfully following along despite how sporadic updates are. ^^;;

I'm also kind of surprised to hear from so many anons already! :O Especially since it has been a year! I thought this fic would've been forgotten already! Thanks for making some noise. :3;

And I want to thank you for the support! I think you were the one to drop by with a message about Invincible some time last year? That was really motivating, thank you! ♥

Re: Had given up hope.... anonymous March 10 2014, 00:10:06 UTC

....yeah that was me....

HAHAHA can't believe you remembered that!
I was also the one to bother you with the books...

Re: Had given up hope.... lucathia_rykatu March 10 2014, 00:26:19 UTC

It's a little hard to keep track. I keep thinking everyone anon is the same person. XD;

finally!!! ext_2043162 March 12 2014, 03:43:04 UTC

yayyyyy an update finally! cold fox and wolf are gonna meet with kenshin. I'm a bl fan so i completely support you cold fox GO GO!

Re: finally!!! lucathia_rykatu March 12 2014, 04:45:14 UTC

I am dearly hoping the next chapter won't take as long... (But in any case, I might introduce some side chapters in between these meaty chapters to make sure the time between updates isn't as ridiculous, and there are some side scenes I'd love to write that don't fit with the current pacing anyway).

I'm a huge fan of Cold Fox x Kenshin. XD;

OMG! ext_2631938 September 1 2014, 23:35:38 UTC

I reread all the chapters and is the NAP squad in the same town? That would be great if Arctic Fox and Wolf haven't left yet. I hope they wait with Storm.

Re: OMG! lucathia_rykatu September 2 2014, 01:13:58 UTC

Hehe, I hope you had fun rereading! ♥

The NAP squad is in the town of Forest Leaf, while Fox and Wolf are at Leafblade! Forest Leaf is near the border of Forgotten Sound and Moon Orchid, while Leafblade is near Leaf Bud City, but more near the coast.

Here's an updated map~~~

It would've been really interesting if they were in the same town...