[Legend of Sun Knight] fic: Bittersweet Sweetness Part 12

[lucathia_rykatu]

Title: Bittersweet Sweetness Part 12
Fandom: The Legend of Sun Knight
Words: 1,919
Summary: Instead of receiving a brooch that dresses him in an assassin's clothes, Sun receives a trinket that switches his consciousness around with Judgment's. Now, Judgment must find out the mystery behind the Death Knight in Sun's stead. Problem is, imitating Sun'

Comments

[anonymous]

becoming one with [his] sword?
That sounds awfully like sun stabbing himself 0_0
Sad thing is, that sounds more plausible than him becoming a master swordsman. XD

On another note, good job with this chapter! I love this fic, and I hope that you don't drop it! :)

[lucathia_rykatu]

Ahaha, oh Sun... yeah, him stabbing himself sounds more likely than him becoming good at the sword. Maybe I should add something along those lines right after that sentence. ;)

Thanks for dropping by! Did you hop over from fanfiction.net or somewhere else?

[leaf_stream777]

I'm from fanfiction.net.
I've actually been following this for some time, but this is the first time I've commented. :)

Btw, have you read the 吾命天子 series? They're an LSK au featuring the characters in imperial china, I think. I can't read traditional chinese that well but I enjoyed what I could decipher. You might like it. Just google the characters to find the fic.

[lucathia_rykatu]

Thanks for commenting. :D It's great to know people are reading this~

I haven't read that, but that sounds intriguing! I've been wanting to find more LSK fics in Chinese to read, but I don't have much of an idea of where to start other than going through Yu Wo's forums and what people post there. I'll have to google this one!

[darkicedragon]

\o/ New part

[lucathia_rykatu]

Haha, I loved writing that second paragraph about Sun being a lazy ass. XDDD

""Did you not get enough sleep yesterday, Judgment?" asked Metal worriedly by my side."
*FLAILS* Cute!!
Hehe! Thankfully Metal was eager to ask questions. Ice wasn't very helpful with that. XD;;

""Is it just me, or does your paperwork smell like lavender?"
*is already dying with laughter*
XDDD Sun now has the best smelling paperwork! \o/

adskfjnhakd *continues to die with laughter* So it's the body that carries the curse. Or, at least, whatever body that Sun's inhabiting at the time that carries the curse. XDDDD
I feel Sun shouldn't be happy at all about this since... this means there's a curse! (unless he's just over-imagining things) XD; Wouldn't it be nicer if there were no curse at all? But he's just overjoyed that he proved his point to himself... XD;

"but he had his head cocked to the side like a puppy might do in rapt attention."
sldkfjasldk ADORABLENESS
Heee, I got to write Cloud! \o/

""I-I wonder if y-you may have m-m-mistaken some other p-

[darkicedragon]

"Ice wasn't very helpful with that. XD;;"
Haaaaa. I don't think Ice would ever be that helpful in that way! XDD

"XDDD Sun now has the best smelling paperwork! \o/"
*snerk* Judgement has the best smelling paperwork! XDD;;;

"I feel Sun shouldn't be happy at all about this since... this means there's a curse!"
Sun's already been cursed with choosing the wrong profession. :P

"But he's just overjoyed that he proved his point to himself... XD;"
'AHA! See! I'm right, Lesus! I am cursed! ...Wait, why am I saying it like it's a good thing

[lucathia_rykatu]

Nope, Ice wasn't talking. Even though I really wanted him to talk. I'm sure he talks when no one's around. XD;

Haha, yeah, "Judgment" has the best smelling paperwork. XDDD

Sun's already been cursed with choosing the wrong profession. :P
Oh Sun, even though you're terrible with a sword, you could have been even more terrifying than you are now if you chose a different profession. XD

'AHA! See! I'm right, Lesus! I am cursed! ...Wait, why am I saying it like it's a good thing?!'
XDDD!!!

I'm probably overdoing it with making him stutter that much in a single sentence. XD; I'm not sure I'm making him stutter at the right words or beginning sounds. Or maybe Earth doesn't stutter at the right sounds anyway since he's faking it... But yeah, that sentence is a pain to read now. XD;; Oh, oh, you wrote Earth for no_true_pair then? :3

Haha, the more Sun speaks, the more he might give himself away. XD What if he accidentally voiced one of his thoughts out loud? XD;;

[lucifrost]

i must say, your writing is remarkable. your writing style reminds me very much of the author's writing style. there are some subtle differences, but in a good way, no worries.

i also think it's impressive that you portray the characters so realistically. mind you, i'm not too familiar with them, but when i read your fics, i sometimes find myself wondering if it really is 'just' fictional, because their (inter-)actions seem to be what they would in the novels.

keep up the good work!

p.s. my respects for actually being capable of writing sun's eloquent speech

[lucathia_rykatu]

Thank you! :) This fic is very influenced by Yu Wo's writing style, though I'm not aiming to imitate her style too closely. I find it very fun writing in 1st person since I don't write that as much as I do 3rd person POVs, and it is great fun breaking the 4th wall at times. More of my own style probably shows in Judgment's parts. :3

I try my best to keep the characters in character! Though for characters like Metal and Moon, I feel I'm possibly just stretching what little we know of them too much. Next time, I won't have much for Sun to comment on them about!

Hehe, Sun's eloquent speech is a killer, though I've mostly weaseled my way out of that. Lesus as Sun hasn't had to use much eloquent speech yet.

[lucifrost]

yeah, i can tell. and you're right, judgment's parts are different than sun's, but that's probably also because we never got / get to know anything in his pov in the novels either.

it's not surprising that those characters are harder to do, since they haven't had played any major part in the novels (yet?)

well, it IS a killer, but tbh, if you examine it closely, there seems to be some pattern to his speeches