Comments | lucathia_rykatu: [Prince of Tennis] fic: He Never Knew part 5

lucathia_rykatu

[Prince of Tennis] fic: He Never Knew part 5

Mar 31, 2011 19:27

Haha...ha. So I thought I would tackle the remaining themes with short drabbles, but there were some themes I really wanted to use for this fic. And then this happened. OTL (How am I going to finish like this? Only a few hours left...) This is not a short drabble. I wish I could have divided this one up into further parts, but it had to be one ( Read more... )

fic type: longfics, fic: he never knew, tenipuri, writing community: 31_days

Comments 6

rei April 1 2011, 03:59:06 UTC

Oooh, cliffie! :c

I've been following this fic and I love it. :D Good job with the different povs!

lucathia_rykatu April 1 2011, 08:14:41 UTC

Yes, cliffie. (sort of?)

Oh yay~. I'm glad to hear this. And oh gosh, the POVs... by the time I got around to St. Rudolph, I knew this part would turn out massive. :')

darkicedragon April 1 2011, 05:31:22 UTC

*goes to your journal* :D :D :D ALL THIS FIC!!! *gets to the reading*

(Bwahaha, over 2k in how many hours? So fast!)

XD 'You're rude and annoying. But that's the one I want to play.'

I like this second person narrative. Huh. Normally I don't (usually it's too jarring, because for me, the 'you' is actually adressing the character, so then I'm sort of, 'who's talking to/about you?' This is more second person omniscient. :3

Hee. So many characters here! :D In so much detail!

kldjfalk Eeeeeee!

lucathia_rykatu April 1 2011, 08:27:49 UTC

I felt like I was spamming. XDDD

I wish I could have been faster! Or at least wrote this on another day and not on the last day because oh gosh, NO TIME. Though I guess it was the no time part that really pushed me. XD;; I sort of wanted to stop writing this part in the middle and divide it up... but that wouldn't have worked with the narration. :'(

'You're rude and annoying. But that's the one I want to play ( ... )

darkicedragon April 5 2011, 10:46:22 UTC

Pfff, I probably should have done this when I uploaded all the yuletide fics. XD;;

"Though I guess it was the no time part that really pushed me."
X3 Hee. Sounds familiar.

"Ah, second person... omniscient. There's such a thing?"
Should be. XD;; We're not sticking with the one character, seeing/hearing different people's thoughts, so... yes? You're making me want to try and experiment with different narratives!

Nope! They were explained and grouped well! :3

lucathia_rykatu April 7 2011, 06:48:24 UTC

Nah, or wait, did you post them all on the same day? XD; But they had more substance than the drabbles I posted on the 31st. XD; I don't think I felt spammed then.

Yeah, and now I haven't written anything since the 31st, hahaha...

I wasn't sure if this would be 2nd person, or 3rd person with how we followed all sorts of people. It's kind of a strange narrative style for me... especially with how speech is all in italics. XD; Now I'm a little stuck with how to go about the next part because I'm not sure what narrative style to use (it's all over the place now for this fic! but at least it's not changing within the same chapter, haha). It's kind of fun experimenting though. :3

Coolness! :D I think I was a bit more explicit in detailing how they were involved with Ryoma so that we'd get more of a feel for each character. It might be a bit repetitive for some people though, if they know all the characters well. XD;