[Bokurano] fic: Those Left Behind: Stop Whispering, Start Shouting

Aug 18, 2010 00:26

It's only the second day, yet I'm already late!

Title: Those Left Behind: Stop Whispering, Start Shouting
Day/Theme: Aug 17 stop whispering, start shouting
Series: Bokurano
Character/Pairing: Waku's parents
Rating: PG
Notes: for 31_days. Spoilers up to chapter 55.
Archive: LJ | ffnet

aug 17: stop whispering, start shouting )

writing community: 31_days, fic type: oneshots, bokurano

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darkicedragon August 18 2010, 10:59:03 UTC
*is tearing up and heart is wrenching* DD: All these expectations and them not coming finalised. And the realisations at the end and his parents cheering for the team! *is incoherent* D':

I'm gonna start reading the series again so I can remember who's who and what their hobbies and stuff are.

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lucathia_rykatu August 19 2010, 00:06:09 UTC
D:

I considered various scenarios (the baseball game was in all of them) and somehow this came about. The friend of the dad was going to play a bigger part, but this felt more natural.

Yes, reread the series with me. Gah, this series makes my heart wrench. I guess my fic doesn't help either!

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darkicedragon August 19 2010, 04:42:59 UTC
^ ^ It's good - it means you drew me in!

Just on to Nakama now (XD I just prefer calling her that, especially at the end) and I really don't want to continue to the part where she's getting bullied. D:

It's in tune/line with the series though. :)

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lucathia_rykatu August 19 2010, 04:47:13 UTC
Oops, I meant soccer game, haha, now that I look at my comment...hopefully I didn't mix them up in the fic.

You must know the beginning a lot better than me then! I keep going through the same chapters near the end...I haven't started today's yet, but I'm trying to find mention of Kokopelli, but I can't seem to find that part!!

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darkicedragon August 19 2010, 05:01:34 UTC
XDD; I thought you meant from the dad's perspective, he focused on baseball games, rather than football games.

It's kinda strange reading the series again; the art's really rough and sketchy, which I really don't remembering noticing the last time. That, and there are all these characters!

Which part are you looking for?

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lucathia_rykatu August 19 2010, 05:06:58 UTC
Hahaha, I've been brainwashed. I keep thinking baseball game...Waku must not be pleased with me for not remembering soccer.

I found that I really missed a lot of detail! I've been reading a few chapters here and there trying to find info about characters. I ended up finding a lot that I either forgot or never noticed the first place. :'D There are so many characters! There are some that I don't know the names of! Komo's dad, Anko's dad, and this other guy...I can't keep them straight.

I was trying to find his name and mention about the number of pilots there were in Kokopelli's world...I found his name in chapter 53. Don't know if there was more explanation beyond that. X3;;

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darkicedragon August 19 2010, 05:21:17 UTC
XDD No, he won't be.

I'm seeing more into the characters interactions (and Ano's reaction to her dad's console being broken was a whole lot funnier) and understanding the meaning behind what they're saying this time around.

I'm remembering from the anime that they took more than what was needed in one world (the number 23 is popping up, dunno if that's true) - and then they all ran away.

Read a bit of the character page on wikipedia and, wow, yeah, there's a lot that I've forgotten. XD;;

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lucathia_rykatu August 19 2010, 05:49:07 UTC
I need to reread the series in order unlike how I've been skipping around. XD; I started taking notes! Oh, her dad's console broke? Why don't I remember this...

Hm, yeah, in the manga they had more people than they needed too. I remember in the anime, Kokopelli had...a daughter? Or something like that. His past isn't explained much in the manga. I'm probably getting my facts from the anime and manga mixed up here.

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darkicedragon August 19 2010, 05:58:35 UTC
XDD You definitely need to take them for this!

X3 It was a little scene (when they get teleported to Zearth in Kodaka's turn) and Ano's holding the controller, but the cable's been cut. XD

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lucathia_rykatu August 19 2010, 06:08:04 UTC
Oh!! Right! That part! That did happen. XD;

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