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lozenger8

Obligatory Fic Post…

Aug 16, 2007 17:32

Title: Never Expected, Always Wanted
Fandom: Life on Mars
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 860 words
Notes: Sam/Gene slash. I’ve only written one fic in the time I’ve been away. And it’s PWP. Sorry to the non-slashers. I’ll, uh, try at some point to write something gen or het.

( Never Expected, Always Wanted )

rated nc-17, slash, writing, short, life on mars

Comments 46

talkingtothesky August 16 2007, 08:26:03 UTC

*thud*

'Nuff said.

lozenger8 August 16 2007, 08:29:11 UTC

That's the sound Sam made when he hit the floor, yes? ;)

hambelandjemima August 16 2007, 08:44:22 UTC

Yay, you got t'internet!

Sam and Gene pr0n to wake up to.... lovely :)
Once a copper, always a copper, even when pushed up tight against another copper, lips and hands and skin. This image will stay with me all day.

Love the banter between them (as usual), and love how uncertain Gene is, bless him. Didn't stop him pushing Sammy about once he'd had his jollies though, lol. I suspect Sam's not complaining though ;)

lozenger8 August 16 2007, 21:37:16 UTC

Thanks :D

It's great to have the internet again. *happy sigh*

dorsetgirl August 16 2007, 09:02:26 UTC

Hey, good to see you back, and with a nice bit of Sam and Gene too.

It’s both less and more intimate than talking to Gene, looking into his eyes. Ain't that the truth. The physical connection as opposed to the mental/emotional one.

Really liked this line - Sam feels Gene’s hair brush against his back as he applies more weight.. That does a beautiful job of conjuring up the whole scene, from Gene's hair to his face to his hands on Sam, to - well, you know, you wrote it, but I just thought I'd tell you it worked!

lozenger8 August 16 2007, 21:29:54 UTC

Thanks :D

I was going for the light touch approach, as opposed to other times when I've likened the mating ritual to the hokey cokey.

tabula_x_rasa August 16 2007, 09:08:07 UTC

Welcome back! Especially when you bring stuff like this...

Very, very nice to wake up to. XD Just the right touch of first-time awkwardness and as always brilliantly in character.

lozenger8 August 16 2007, 21:27:30 UTC

Yay!

Thanks :D

dodificus August 16 2007, 09:08:22 UTC

I mean, that was hot, yes? But what I really loved was their dialogue, totally and completely in character even when they're having crazy gay sex:)

lozenger8 August 16 2007, 21:26:34 UTC

♥ Good. I am glad it was hot. But mostly that you loved the dialogue and thought they were in character. Thanks :D