Um, beta?
I'm almost done on a short, (hell, it's not even that, just pure sex) but my mind is getting kind of..distracted along the way, and I was wondering if anyone would be willing to beta it for me? A/C (of course) no real warnings apart from the fact that it's a definite R rating. (Do scales and feathers count?)
oh, and it was written to VNV nation's Cold. Any VNV fans out there will get an immediate idea of what it's like...
Also, a question for any Londonites out there - how deep is the duck pond in St James' park at its deepest part? (haven't been to the UK for nearly ten years, I'm afraid) Apart from that, what's the nearest decent-sized body of water? (apart from the Thames itself)
EDIT: Just to clarify - this is written in international English. Not American english. Why is this important? because I've been arguing with both word's autocorrect feature and its dictionary trying to get it to STOP changing all my lovely S's to Z's and arguing with me over the use of the letter U and would appreciate someone who can catch ones I've missed :)
oh, and it was written to VNV nation's Cold. Any VNV fans out there will get an immediate idea of what it's like...
Also, a question for any Londonites out there - how deep is the duck pond in St James' park at its deepest part? (haven't been to the UK for nearly ten years, I'm afraid) Apart from that, what's the nearest decent-sized body of water? (apart from the Thames itself)
EDIT: Just to clarify - this is written in international English. Not American english. Why is this important? because I've been arguing with both word's autocorrect feature and its dictionary trying to get it to STOP changing all my lovely S's to Z's and arguing with me over the use of the letter U and would appreciate someone who can catch ones I've missed :)