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[dreya_uberwald]

Written for call_twilight who requested a ficlet featuring Adam/Pepper.

Comments

[prologi]

Ee, so cute!

Also:
“I was hardly suggesting that he do the latter Crowley.”

That should be “I was hardly suggesting that he do the latter COMMA Crowley.” There is a large difference between "Let's go and eat, Bob" and "Let's go and eat Bob." You made that mistake a few times.

[memii]

...Somehow, leaving out the comma there makes it much, much more hilarious.

[dreya_uberwald]

*Goes into facepalm mode*

Oh dear, I'm thinking terrible thoughts about what Aziraphale was suggesting Adam do to the 'former Crowley'.

[burntcopper]

Well, the former Crowely wasn't at stylish. The latter Crowley left him in the fourteenth century.

[dreya_uberwald]

Oh dear, former Crowley/latter Crowley never really stood a chance. They were always going to have an acrimonious break-up following an argument over who possessed the sharpest clothing.

[dreya_uberwald]

Thank you :D

Gah, once more I seem to have buggered up the commas. Thanks for pointing out.