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Fic: "One Angel in Another's Hell" by Aura

Feb 27, 2005 00:33

Title: "One Angel in Another's Hell"

Author: Aura

Summary: In 1985, Aziraphale is assigned to a lost soul. And he isn't getting attached; nope, no personal attachments here. Crossover with Harry Potter.
Specs: Rated R. No spoilers. Short story. Not a swooning romance, but the ships are Remus/Sirius, Crowley/Aziraphale, and Aziraphale-Remus ( Read more... )

slash, crowley, crossover, fic, crossover:harry potter, aziraphale

Comments 26

sanguineheart February 27 2005, 06:00:37 UTC

The feather duster pinwheeled through the air and hit Crowley in the chest. --Haha. The image of that. Beautiful.

And yes! Caramel Kisses rule! :D

Great job, by the way. Lovely. Mhm. ;]

aura218 February 27 2005, 07:15:10 UTC

Thanks!

Damn, now I'm really craving those kisses. Shouldn't've said anything.

kyraille February 27 2005, 06:01:13 UTC

....guh. That was lovely! I adore both pairings (and mixing them up to benefit humanity, of course) and you did a very nice job blurring the two fandoms.

He stared at it, stunned. "You threw that at me."

My mental image of utterly shocked!Crowley is really amusing.

aura218 February 27 2005, 07:16:21 UTC

Thank you! I was hoping I struck a good balance w/out making the transitions seem jarring.

My mental image of utterly shocked!Crowley is really amusing.

hee, mine too. :)

brokenbacktango February 27 2005, 06:11:05 UTC

Wow, I really, really liked that. I admit I haven't had the time to read a lot of the stuff posted here lately, but I'm happy I stopped to read this one. I just had to see what you did with it. The ending was cute! Though I thought it was little rushed (only because I wanted more :)). I'm afraid I don't have anything constructive to add. I do like your style though.

aura218 February 27 2005, 07:20:25 UTC

Ah, I see what you mean about too rushed. Think I should have shown Crowley's jealousy more in the early bits of the fic to set up the ending? That was my intention - that he was teasing Crowley in the shop and being a jackass in the park/resturant even though he agreed to be helpful because he was jealous.

Well, that was constructive crit, v. helpful. :) Thanks, glad you enjoyed the rest of the fic.

What's your icon? Phantom movie? It's neato.

brokenbacktango February 27 2005, 08:05:12 UTC

Yeah, Crowley's jackass-ness didn't really come across to me (well, it was subtle--I've read it again and I do see it now), but I wasn't too peeved about it. Hey, if anything it means you have more of this story to tell. I'm definitely open for a sequel.

My icon is actually (don't laugh) from a scene in the live action series Pretty Guardian Sailor Moon. It fits perfectly with a few of my fetishes, so I had to have it as an icon. I love that you say "neato," btw, I thought I was the only one still saying that :)

aura218 February 27 2005, 08:45:52 UTC

"Neato" is an adorable and perfectly servicable word and must never be retired. :)

So, it's a live action Sailor Moon? Ah, coo. I never got into that, my OTA (one true anime) is Inuyasha. I guess I'd probably like SM, b/c I love Buffy and people say it's similar. IY is my fave b/c it has this increadibly complicated plot, and I think one complex anime is all my head has room for. :)

elanor_two February 27 2005, 06:22:07 UTC

Oh, fabulous!
I usually really don't like crossovers. But this was done so easily and flowed so nicely that it didn't bother me one bit. The characters were in the moment and unforced and the story was short but oh-so-meaningful. Beautiful fic. :)

aura218 February 27 2005, 07:22:15 UTC

Ha! I converted another to the unholy crossover! Or got them to read one story. :) (Kidding - getting a lot of "I don't read xovers but" comments, which I take as high praise that you liked something you don't normally like.)

The characters were in the moment and unforced

Oh, I'm glad to hear that. That was actually the two things I was concerned about - keeping the tone in motion rather than retrospective, and making this all believable. :)

elanor_two February 27 2005, 19:34:33 UTC

Well, you've certainly converted me to your fic, anyway. :) I think I usually don't like xovers cause they seems so forced, and random, and they never go together. But this one does if you work it right, and you really really did. :)

thesicksadworld February 27 2005, 15:35:16 UTC

Same! All the crossovers I've read have sucked, save this one. :)

Very good job!

synekdokee February 27 2005, 06:51:31 UTC

That was a bit more than A/L "friendship". If Aziraphale loved him and they shagged. I mean, it was awesomely written, but a warning would've been nice, I'm a pretty picky slasher.

aura218 February 27 2005, 07:14:32 UTC

Ah. Sorry. I meant "friends with benefits." A/L I'd call a relationship, not just sleeping together, so. Different criteria for the terminology.

Glad you liked it anyway.