Need a Beta!
Hi everyone!
I'm working on a GO slash fic and I would appreciate some criticism before posting it anywhere. Spelling, punctuation and grammar are already beta-ed, so I'd like the beta to focus on characterisation, narrative, and plot.
Any volunteers may send me an e-mail to mitchelldq@yahoo.es, and I'll send the first two chapters.
Thanks!
P.S. Just to pique your curiosity, here's a part of the fic:
No one was really sure how it happened. “It just seemed like a good idea at the time,” Crowley admitted. “It was obviously the next step,” Aziraphale said. But the fact that neither of them could give a satisfactory explanation to the events that occurred years after the almost-Apocalypse was quite disturbing.
“Maybe,” said Aziraphale, looking at the twin cribs, “it’s just ineffable.”
I'm working on a GO slash fic and I would appreciate some criticism before posting it anywhere. Spelling, punctuation and grammar are already beta-ed, so I'd like the beta to focus on characterisation, narrative, and plot.
Any volunteers may send me an e-mail to mitchelldq@yahoo.es, and I'll send the first two chapters.
Thanks!
P.S. Just to pique your curiosity, here's a part of the fic:
No one was really sure how it happened. “It just seemed like a good idea at the time,” Crowley admitted. “It was obviously the next step,” Aziraphale said. But the fact that neither of them could give a satisfactory explanation to the events that occurred years after the almost-Apocalypse was quite disturbing.
“Maybe,” said Aziraphale, looking at the twin cribs, “it’s just ineffable.”