ok here is my story its not finished but anyway

[lovingislosing5]

Once upon a time, there was a girl she was lonely and she was sad. Her name was Rose. She was an orphan and she ran away from her home. See her parents died in a terrible plane crash. he rest of her family she did not knowthis where the our story begins. it is a Friday in October, her birthday in fact, she is on a street coner singing her heart out and playing the gutiar. She had a lovely voice, but the people she was living with didnt understand that.They thought that life was all about work, "You have to work to get anywhere in life," they always said. Now Rose, who was a free spirt thought i can take this for a little while. So she ran away, she thought c ity life would be better then that life and for her she was right. She met new and interseting people everyday and that wasnt the problem. She was alone, that was the problem. Not the money, not the cold nights, and not the fact that she ran away. Its wasnt anything really, but the fact she was alone and in some way she always would be. This scared her of course, but one day in December, she met a wonderful guy and his name was Nate. He was rich, handsome, and an all around great guy. He saw her at a coffee shop table, writing in her book. She had a little money and a small room in a house with 12 other people living in it. She didnt spend much time there. She only went home to sleep. Well, oneday he saw her and he thought that she was so beautiful he had to have her. He went up to her and said, "i have been looking for you all my life." "Thats sweet , but if you have been looking all your life i think you could have found me a lot sooner than you did." Then she walked away. He ran after her. "Wait did i hurt you in anyway." "No, no one can hurt me anymore." "Well, I am sorry." "What did you do?" "Nothing, but I am sorry people hurt you." "Well, thank you, but you dont have to care about my feelings and I. "Youre right i dont have to, but i want to." "Come with me ," she said. "I will gladly follow you to the end of the earth." "Well, I fly away so be sure and keep up." "Leed the way." She took him to her home if you could call it a home. When they walked in the door every one in the house stops and looked at them. She said, "What the heck you looking at." Then they all go back to what they are doing. She leeds him up to her room. "This is where I live." "So?" " I am poor." "So?" "You dont care?" "No, I dont care." You can be and are a wonderfull person and be poor.

and thats it so far
please tell me what you think please