Comments | lovethesnark: heroes fic: this isn't just a road trip

lovethesnark

heroes fic: this isn't just a road trip

Oct 25, 2007 02:30

Fandom: Heroes
Title: This Isn't Just a Road Trip
Rated: PG-13
Starring: Matt/Janice, Mohinder, Molly
Spoilers: Up until 2x04, The Kindness of Strangers

( The weird part is that while she’s giving him water and food and fetching him blankets, she’s compiling grocery lists in her head. )

fandom: heroes

Comments 5

sophiap October 25 2007, 10:32:19 UTC

What I love about this is that I both empathize with Matt and want to slap him, which just goes to show that you've captured the messiness of the whole situation very well.

Favorite quote:

"He kisses the top of her head and listens to her counting backwards from one thousand and thinks it’s really kind of amazing that they both know he can read her mind, and yet are so good at pretending they don’t remember that part."

nurse_stiney October 25 2007, 11:39:43 UTC

That was a BRILLIANT explanation for what could have happened in those four months. BRILLIANT. I feel SO horribly bad for Matt, it's ridiculous. And I'm not originally much of a Matt fan (it took the formation of the M^3 family for me to think he = love, LOL). I LOVE IT!!!

fool_of_ships October 25 2007, 14:56:04 UTC

Wow...love the total plausibility of this. I think it's really made me realize that if you can't decide whether you want to hug Matt or slap him, he's being written right. And you got him right. Yay!

a_bit_befuddled October 25 2007, 15:57:03 UTC

This was amazing. It's very likely that this is exactly what happened and I loved the way you wrote it.

(By the way I understood the title as soon as I saw the first list and realized it was in alphabetical order. :3)

ivy_b October 25 2007, 19:49:20 UTC

I loved this. Poor Matt... Only thing is- when Nathan and Matt met in season 2, they acted like they never really met. So I doubt Nathan Petrelli would give Janice a job, when he doesn't even know her husband.