I love how luxurious the motel seems to Sam, so spacious, with two beds, endless water, lots of towels and pillows, wonderful soap and bottles of shampoo.
As for the chapter, well! I'm loving this story so much I haven't been reviewing each chapter cos I need to get to the next one so fast, so... SORRY!! This chapter was very bittersweet for Dean, you wrote it really well, I'm wondering what's gonna happen when Sam gets his memory back and realises Dean actually is his brother... Surely it's gonna happen soon? There's only a few chapters left, isn't there? Hmm... Can't wait to read more, so gonna go now! XD
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Extra word: His movements weren’t wasn’t mooth
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I like Sam's reaction too, after a thin mattress on a metal bed, this would have been heavenly for him. And Dean, too.
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"Tina? Is there something we can do about these g-glitches?"
"I think there was a g-glitch when you said g-glitch."
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qlyfSiHR9-k - Umbilical Brothers glitch sketch - totally awesome.
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As for the chapter, well! I'm loving this story so much I haven't been reviewing each chapter cos I need to get to the next one so fast, so... SORRY!! This chapter was very bittersweet for Dean, you wrote it really well, I'm wondering what's gonna happen when Sam gets his memory back and realises Dean actually is his brother... Surely it's gonna happen soon? There's only a few chapters left, isn't there? Hmm... Can't wait to read more, so gonna go now! XD
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And thanks for the link, those guys are hysterical!
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