[SGA] Remember Paul Van Riper

Mar 08, 2008 10:56

Title: Remember Paul Van Riper
Pairing: McKay/Brown, McKay/Sheppard
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 7700
Summary: There's more than one battlefield on which to play a war game.
Notes: Written for
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sga: katie/rodney, sga: john/rodney

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bluflamingo March 5 2008, 18:03:08 UTC
I don't know how many times I've read this (and not commented, slapped wrist!) but I love it even more each time, especially Lorne and the Marines, and how things just go on pretty much as normal after John makes his move - there's no major drama or angst or anything, and they're still friends.

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paradise_city March 7 2008, 04:29:48 UTC
Thanks so much for the comment! It's really nice to know the fic holds up on multiple readings, and I'm glad you've enjoyed it. :)

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paradise_city April 26 2008, 16:01:27 UTC
Thanks so much for the feedback! Personally, I think Zelenka has all kinds of secret mad skillz that he's just sitting on until the perfect moment comes along. He's really one of my favorite characters on the show.

Glad you enjoyed the read. :)

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snarryfool December 3 2008, 16:53:11 UTC
Lovely story, funny and touching, and if it kills me that you ended it without bringing John and Rodney together definitively, well, who am I to begrudge you your Actual Grown-up Fictional Structure?

Seriously, I read all your McSheps, and each is clever and original. Many thanks.

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paradise_city December 8 2008, 20:46:23 UTC
Sorry for the late reply, but finals kept me busy.

Thanks very much for the feedback -- I'm really glad you've enjoyed my fic. McKay/Sheppard is such a fun pairing and there's so much possibility for the two them. They're amazingly fun to write and read. :)

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etanol December 10 2008, 12:29:29 UTC
bless. this is beyond lovely.

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trystings January 7 2010, 19:51:49 UTC
Here through sgastoryfinders. This is fantastic. Perfect voices. Great story.

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paradise_city January 8 2010, 19:27:28 UTC
Thanks so much! I had a lot of fun writing this fic, so I'm glad the voices worked well for you. And thanks for the feedback!

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