White, Lily/Severus

[red_erythros]

TITLE: White
Pairing: Severus/Lily
Rating: G
Summary: Severus Snape distinctly remembers the colour white in different instances in his life.
Author's Notes: I thought it was high time I exercised my writing again. Given, I don't think I was too inspired while writing this, but I quite like it. It's been a dormant idea in my head since... uhm, May?

Comments

[thesaneminority]

All I can say is that you have written some damn fine fic, and now I kind of want to cry. The good kind of crying, I mean.

[red_erythros]

Oh, thank you! I'm glad you think so! :) And I'm sorry I made you want to cry, haha!

[ananya01]

Oh that was so beautiful. A great piece of work, well done! ;)

[red_erythros]

Thank you! :)

[caercaia]

That was... amazing. I loved everything about it, the emotion, the insight into his thoughts, the way you so precisely described his age at each point! This was beautiful.

[red_erythros]

Thank you! I don't know why, but I particularly love to write from Snape's POV. It seems easier, too, although one day, I plan to write something like this from Lily's perspective. Heh :)

[shyfoxling]

Beautiful.

[red_erythros]

thank you! :)

[lavinialavender]

Very nice. Excellent rhythm, when I reached the end I got chills.

[red_erythros]

Thank you! I thought the ending lacked something, but I'm glad it had some sort of impact on you. :)