my kingdom for a horse [ fic ]

[lovelyable]

it's all static, baby (a year's progress)
gd/top, pg-13, 3442 words, canon
how to get over somebody, told backwards. for kpop_olymfics

Comments

[underhand_glory]

this really knocked me out when i read it at olymfics so i feel the need to comment properly-ish

i really love the reoccuring i can'ts throughout the piece. you can almost feel something breaking.

and daul omg :(

[lovelyable]

ahhh you found me from olymfics :)! and i hope i did right by daul. thank you for reading, i'm really happy you liked it enough to comment.

[fullofwishes]

Thanks for making me cry, you bitch. &hearts

No, but really, this was breathtaking, and so well done...ugh comment would get more incoherent so I'll end it here. ;^;

[lovelyable]

MY BAD :( thanks so much girl, i love getting comments from you :). /tissue

[paradethepaper]

The only word I have in my mind right now is 'wow' so I'm trying to come up with something a bit more coherent.

I loved reading this. I love seeing the progression of Jiyong's heart-brokenness (and him naming his album Heartbreaker -- good one xD), and as I scrolled back up, everything became a lot clearer and I was like 'ahhh *enlightenment*'. Also, I like how you brought in the other Big Bang members into the story, and they're all in character even though they aren't the main feature. :D

[lovelyable]

i love incoherence so either way is fine~ hopefully the heartbreaker part wasn't too cheesy, and i'm glad the other big bang boys were okay for you - i love them equally though they're not the focus of the fic. thanks for the review :)

[butterflyweb]

I lovelovelove that it both began and ended in the same place, because that's truly what getting over someone is. To be in a way, back where you started, if older, wiser, more full of memories (but maybe ones you can look at fondly, now.

Jiyong begging was just so painful and that scene was just so perfect it hurt a little. And it fit so well.

Last:

Seungri is doing enough scowling for the both of them because 'you're-an-asshole-how-dare-you-do-this-to-hyungnim' is written all across his face.

Seungri is on Jiyong's side. Always, and I love him for it.

[lovelyable]

i seem to do that a lot - take certain themes from the beginning scene and incorporate them into the end - but i'm glad you liked it! and i agree about how it's pretty much the process of getting over somebody, being in the same situations but not the same person. I LOVE SEUNGRI. and writing that scene with gd pleading kind of hurt ; ; thanks so much for commenting girl :)!

[animegoil]

Damn, that was beautiful. Beautiful descriptions, beautiful sense of capturing each little moment to mean something and be a separate stage <3 It was hard to keep it straight in my head because it was progressing backwards, but I loved the idea, and I loved even more that if you chose to, you could read it forwards too. That's really something neat <3

[lovelyable]

ahhh thank you! hopefully it wasn't too confusing or anything, reading from end point to starting point, but i'm glad you liked it enough to comment anyway :)