I never saw the episode with Matt, and I only recently found out that he was played by Dane Cook. I'm a huge fan of his standup, so reading his dialog in this fic has been just fun as hell, since I could totally imagine his voice and inflection for just about every line. :D
I won't even lie, my absolute favourite part of this whole thing was writing Matt and John McGarrett. Apparently I'm a sucker for practically-original-characters.
I love how everyone is getting along so well--well, Matt's being kind of a little brother nudge--and Steve and Danny couldn't be more adorable. I wish John could lighten up a little regarding Steve, but at least Danny's there to keep things calm.
(Steve wasn’t sure why, but ‘Super-Cool-T-Rex-Awesome’ didn’t sound as bad as it should have, though he was definitely ruling out ‘Princess Gracie’s Super-Fighters’, because daughter or not, he had his limits). Both of these names ROCKED but I'm glad they went with Five-0 instead :)
This was wonderful. I love how Matt is that annoying little brother yet you love him..lol....How Steve now see what having a little brother is like and Matt trying to see Steve's intentions with his brother. The whole group being together was so nice and having Meka abroad is also great. Glad the team likes the 5-0 name. The way you wrote how John is becoming now that the task force is startng and he is losing the ones he trust sad but also made me feel that something might happen to him. I know there isn't much more left here or I'd thing that Hesse would be back to kill John like on the show so it has to be something else since I am almost at the end. Anyway I love your writing and this story along with this part of the chapter. It's late here so will read the rest of this later on but wanted to comment on what I did read. Have a great Memorial day and again I really think this story is brilliant.
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I love how everyone is getting along so well--well, Matt's being kind of a little brother nudge--and Steve and Danny couldn't be more adorable. I wish John could lighten up a little regarding Steve, but at least Danny's there to keep things calm.
(Steve wasn’t sure why, but ‘Super-Cool-T-Rex-Awesome’ didn’t sound as bad as it should have, though he was definitely ruling out ‘Princess Gracie’s Super-Fighters’, because daughter or not, he had his limits). Both of these names ROCKED but I'm glad they went with Five-0 instead :)
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The whole group being together was so nice and having Meka abroad is also great. Glad the team likes the 5-0 name. The way you wrote how John is becoming now that the task force is startng and he is losing the ones he trust sad but also made me feel that something might happen to him. I know there isn't much more left here or I'd thing that Hesse would be back to kill John like on the show so it has to be something else since I am almost at the end. Anyway I love your writing and this story along with this part of the chapter. It's late here so will read the rest of this later on but wanted to comment on what I did read. Have a great Memorial day and again I really think this story is brilliant.
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♥ Thank you for reading!
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