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inugrlrayn in lovelusthonour

What I Should Have Said

Oct 13, 2006 04:22

Title: What I Should Have Said
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: RoyxEd

Author's Notes: Written for my darling Tsu. An angsty one-shot inspired by the lyrics of Hurt by Christina Aguilera.

( the words licked wickedly at his ears as dark hair skimmed Ed’s face, the older man’s body pressing teasingly against his own, sliding easily against the leather pants he wore. )

Comments 11

vampslayer04 October 13 2006, 14:21:08 UTC

Ow. When you said angsty, you meant it. *sniffles* This would make a good multi-part story, if you ever got the urge to continue it. Yes, I know you said it was a one-shot; it's just so open-ended.

inugrlrayn October 13 2006, 15:11:23 UTC

my one-shots, usually, end up as multi-chapter stories. The thing with this one, what I like best is the open-endedness of it. I worry that if i were to continue it, it would lose what made it good. That and I have like.... 15 writing projects I'm working on right now!

secretfreaky December 11 2006, 20:51:15 UTC

I've read this twice now and it still pulls something from me. It hurts in a sweet, sentimental way. I don't have the words to describe it, it's just beautiful.

inugrlrayn December 12 2006, 21:44:09 UTC

Im glad you liked it. It was a very emotional thing to write and it's always an honor to know my writing has an effect on someone else too.

Adorable icon by the way.

realnobiki February 4 2007, 12:05:26 UTC

*sob* too good, too sad, and just a hint of maybe a kind of happy ending. thanks

inugrlrayn February 4 2007, 18:00:22 UTC

I'm soo glad you enjoyed it. I almost considered writing a sequel, but I don't feel like it would be as good to give a direct answer to what comes next.

bamberbabe88 April 22 2007, 21:36:32 UTC

so sad I wish there was more to it. i love the dream sequnce how it went back and forth. WOW! LOVE IT1 ^_^

the fullmentalalcmist anonymous July 4 2007, 03:25:16 UTC

whty is ro at ed's grave