When the Night is Cloudy (Angel the Series)

May 20, 2007 22:54

Title: When the Night is Cloudy
Author: The Brat Queen
Fandom: Angel the Series
Characters/Pairing: Darla, Angel
Summary: Darla can't stand being pregnant, or not being able to sleep at night.
Rating: G
Word Count: 1,002
Note: Thanks to wolfling for the beta.

Her back hurt )

thebratqueen, angel, !fic, !2007, darla

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thebratqueen May 21 2007, 15:59:26 UTC
Indeed you do! Thanks =)

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bunnster May 21 2007, 13:30:43 UTC
Loving this! There's not enough Darla fic out there for me, so I'm happy about this one. Twice happy because you're the person who wrote it. I used to lurk your journal to read your stories (esp. liked the rps *blush*) but haven't seen you write anything in awhile.

Great character voice. It felt very much like Darla. Totally frustrated with her situation, but coming to love the child despite herself and trying not to show it. Wouldn't fit with the tough image she has of herself.

"They - they can't - some will want to protect you," she said. She looked down again, making that eye contact that wasn't really eye contact. "They'll have the best of intentions and some particularly stupid ideas on how to make them happen. But that's not going to matter. In the end there's only you. Forget that, and you die."

Sad how right she is.

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thebratqueen May 21 2007, 16:00:15 UTC
I've been having some health probs that have gotten in the way of writing. I'm rather pleased I was able to do this. More pleased that folks like it. So yay! =)

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tabaqui May 21 2007, 13:43:03 UTC
Ahhh, nice. I loved Darla so much... Just good stuff.

She stopped. She felt cold, which was ridiculous, and uncertain, which was preposterous.

Either way, she changed the subject.

Yessss.

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thebratqueen May 21 2007, 16:00:29 UTC
Merci!

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thebratqueen May 21 2007, 16:25:27 UTC
Thank ya thank ya! I have to admit it gave me a few new glimpses while I was writing it, so I'm glad I could share. =)

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annasbeta May 21 2007, 16:59:57 UTC
Two comments:

(1) YAY! SHE WROTE AGAIN!

and

(2) Damn, she did it again. She made me interested and sympathetic to somebody, some character I have't thought of in two years.

Bloody marvelous work, wot?

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thebratqueen May 21 2007, 17:26:01 UTC
*beams proudly*

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