Bet Me; Chapter 8; An Introduction to Soul Gazing

Apr 19, 2012 00:27



Massive thanks to my beta readers Bex, and Lauren3210. Thank you to everyone who is reading this. Thanks for every one who takes the time to comment here and on FF. I have to say I'm super crazy pumped for the next episode of TVD.

Bet Me; Chapter 8; Intro to Soul Gazing )

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parnassides April 18 2012, 15:59:30 UTC
Wonderful :) This chapter had everything. The opening scene was incredibly hot, and just brimming with sexual tension. I think Damon now has a slightly better understanding of what's going on in Elena's head, so even though things are still far from resolved between them, they're gradually getting there.

The eye contact exercise was amazing, I could totally feel the intensity. Eye contact's a really odd thing, because you make eye contact with people all the time without even thinking about it, but then when you become aware of it it can be so intense, especially with certain people, and I think you really reflected that.

I really liked this:

Elena didn't know which was worse; walking around with a blindfold on, and trying not to fall over, or this intense eye contact session with Damon.

Von Gruber was as creepy as ever. I'm very intrigued about the fact that Damon and Elena have been set a different exercise to everyone else. I'm looking forward to seeing Damon and Elena tackle their exercise, and I'm really looking forward to their individual session!

And then, to top it all off, you ended it with a huge twist! What is Katherine doing there?!!

This story just gets better and better <3

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