My accomplishment Obi-Ani-wise: CW Vol2 partly watched. actually I just searched for tattooed Anakin. Have found it. O.o SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAL
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You reviewed me and said this: Ok. Sorry, but this is atrocious. Totally MarySue, at its worst. The plot is cliché, your spelling is AWFUL, and like, what's with the SW-universe? Midichlorian count 1560 is like of an average person, please! To be a Jedi you need like 10,000. And you can check that on the net if you don't believe me. Your characterisation is just zero as well. Well, to sum it up, I just almost screamed from the horror this is, even though I'm in a public information center.
Sorry I just couldn't keep this to myself. If you want to flame me back, feel free, I'm on LiveJournal under the same name.
First of all, I would just like to say that it was FANFICTION!!! If you don't remember what that is let me remind you. It's where FANS write FICTIONAL stories about a book, movie, ect. that they like. As long as it remains as such I can write whatever I bloody well feel like! Now, about the Mary Sue thing *sigh* Okay, yes I'll admit it; Eliza is a May Sue. However, if you got through aal nime of my chapters AND the authers note you must have liked something I wrote. As for spelling, you might want to cheak yours as well. Characterization is spelled C-H-A-R-A-C-T-E-R-I-Z-A-T-I-O-N not C-H-A-R-A-C-T-E-R-I-S-A-T-I-O-N. I did look up the mediclorien count, but here's the part that amazes me. I looked it up BEFORE I typed it up and morons like you still question me! Why don't all you people just DO A DAME GOOGLE SEARCH! Oh, and remember to cheak your spelling and look at more than one sight while you're at it! Thank you for listening ~Alsey
Ok. Sorry, but this is atrocious. Totally MarySue, at its worst. The plot is cliché, your spelling is AWFUL, and like, what's with the SW-universe? Midichlorian count 1560 is like of an average person, please! To be a Jedi you need like 10,000. And you can check that on the net if you don't believe me. Your characterisation is just zero as well.
Well, to sum it up, I just almost screamed from the horror this is,
even though I'm in a public information center.
Sorry I just couldn't keep this to myself. If you want to flame me
back, feel free, I'm on LiveJournal under the same name.
First of all, I would just like to say that it was FANFICTION!!! If you don't remember what that is let me remind you. It's where FANS write FICTIONAL stories about a book, movie, ect. that they like. As long as it remains as such I can write whatever I bloody well feel like! Now, about the Mary Sue thing *sigh* Okay, yes I'll admit it; Eliza is a May Sue. However, if you got through aal nime of my chapters AND the authers note you must have liked something I wrote. As for spelling, you might want to cheak yours as well. Characterization is spelled C-H-A-R-A-C-T-E-R-I-Z-A-T-I-O-N not C-H-A-R-A-C-T-E-R-I-S-A-T-I-O-N. I did look up the mediclorien count, but here's the part that amazes me. I looked it up BEFORE I typed it up and morons like you still question me! Why don't all you people just DO A DAME GOOGLE SEARCH! Oh, and remember to cheak your spelling and look at more than one sight while you're at it!
Thank you for listening
~Alsey
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