another white dash

[loveclouds]

another white dash
jaejoong/yoochun
pg-13
yoochun tries to leave with the stuff he needs.

for sleepish. happy 19th, linda panda! :) ilu! ♥

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[sleepish]

okay here we go.

first of all i love love love the contrast you set up between yoochun clinging to things and jaejoong easily letting things go cause i've always kind of entertained that idea and yeah i just really like it. :(

“Need to smoke, didn’t know if you smoked, need to smoke, didn’t want to annoy you before we even met, need to smoke, is it okay if I smoke?”

DEAD AT THIS SCENE.

Jaejoong’s eyes are clear and honest and Yoochun could hate him for it, could hate him for saying something like that, because now he has no choice but to let Jaejoong go.

tries not to let it show how much he wants to run out, right now, so they don’t have to spend another second together and create one more memory that’s going to haunt him for all the times when he’s going to be alone.

i feel like these lines are so perfect and perfectly yoochun. :( i want to give him many hugs. :((( then the sections where he's running back and forth from the car and room makes me want to laugh and wibble at the same time. YOOCHUN.

“You idiot,” Jaejoong whispers, looking more upset than Yoochun’s ever seen, “what part of ‘you have my heart with you’ did you not understand?”

just lsdkfjkldfks. and then the pissed off making out. so fucking good.

“You know, Yoochun-ah, there’s really something about having everything you need sitting in the seat right next to you.”

YUXI WHY DO YOU WRITE SUCH SAPPY THINGS AND MAKE ME SOB MY HEART OUT. weeps thank you so much for writing this. :(( ♥

[loveclouds]

dfsakjlsdlkajsdf YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY \:D/ CELEBRATING GOOD TIMES, RIGHT NOW! :D so happy that you liked, thank you for liking it!!! :DDDDDDD

i am also glad that we feel the same about yoochun and jaejoong. this is good for our HEALTHY RELATIONSHIP. :D

dafskadsjfsdf idk weeps i hope you're having an amazing birthday thus far. ;3; ilu! :D ♥