nothing but blue skies

Apr 11, 2010 03:37

nothing but blue skies
yunho/changmin
pg-13
when being over is better than being under.

am i bright enough to shine in your spaces? )

p: yunho/changmin

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latenightchai April 11 2010, 08:51:47 UTC
omg, this was amazing ♥

i absolutely love the idea of Underground/Upperground and the whole set-up of this au. post-apocalyptic fiction is one of my favorite genres and at first it seemed like just a play on that, but the more the story unfolded the more depth and complexity revealed itself. i felt like we were only getting a small glimpse into a much larger story, but at the same time i was perfectly content with what i got. and, asljaj;kgaj i'm currently writing an original story that's actually got some similar themes to this so i'm all about construction these days, and so i'm quite in awe of the way you worked it

but that aside, i loved the homin in this, the way their relationship just kind of exists, and there just seemed to be something about them that was so... grounded (excuse the pun, lol). and even before the whole 'perfect last day' i could totally see changmin slowly letting yunho go, and when he really did, oh. ;; when yunho 'talked' to changmin in his head it was just so wonderfully sad. the whole end was just such love. ♥

another wonderful fic, dear :')

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loveclouds April 11 2010, 08:54:59 UTC
\:D/

lol wow, that's such a huge compliment :x thanks so much! i wish you the best of luck because i won't lie, i actually hate constructing au worlds where it's au enough to need WORLD CONSTRUCTION D: so i'm surprised at myself for getting through this. it was written from 1-4am very sloppily so i'm actually quite relieved it wasn't incoherent and terrible D: -_-

:) i love homin so much omfg ;____; ♥ i just want to hot glue gun them together for eternity and then i'd be happy forever and ;____;

♥ :3

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