nothing but blue skies

Apr 11, 2010 03:37

nothing but blue skies
yunho/changmin
pg-13
when being over is better than being under.

am i bright enough to shine in your spaces? )

p: yunho/changmin

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apocryphalic April 11 2010, 08:28:07 UTC
I honestly don’t know how you never realized that I love aus like this : l I love, love, love dystopian worlds or even just worlds in which things are just slightly off. But since you don’t know, let me tell you why then : l I love fics like this because you can picture the world in your mind as you’re reading the fic, I can see the pipes and I can see the dirt and the smooth metal ceiling that serves as their sky. And fuck, I love fics like this T___T it’s like the love child of 1984 with a government that tells you what to do and you have to do it and The Giver where a character is trying to break free of the life he’s given because he knows what’s out there and how much more there is. Fuck, did I mention I love this fic yet? &Hearts;

He liked Yunho, still likes him, and whenever their mothers were too busy to pay attention, they always snuck out to play around between the mazes of pipes and metals in the Underground.
I picture the matrix for some reason, lol. But god, I love the sci-fi feel to this fic, how they live underground in a world they built that’s composed of tunnels and pipes and metals. It’s like a lego castle but with steel.

Despite all the books and illustrations and the very rare movies he's seen, Changmin doesn't quite understand the concept of blue.
And it’s lines like this and the entire paragraph which I would quote but then that just seems excessive, that had me squealing and excited about this fic. It’s the world you created and the circumstances of the people in this au that make this such an amazing fic ; ;

It's crazy to think that you can hear what death sounds like, but for generations of Pipe guards, that was all to be heard. The sound of acidic rains reverberate down the pipes in metallic clinks, the force of poisonous winds so strong that the Pipe ends thrum from it.
This is gold. It’s so good. I don’t even know anymore. There’s nuclear winters that bleed into nuclear summers (or is it the other way around, idk) and then there’s acidic rains and the sound of death. Bloody hell, yucky, I adore this fic so much.

He waits for a bit before moving forward to hug his boyfriend of ten years and lover of six
I don’t know if it’s because I’ve known you for a while now or if it’s because we talk like every minute we’re awake but when I read this, I was thinking that you’re about to kill one of them or both of them and I had this moment where I was telling myself you wouldn’t do it because you wouldn’t dare T_T

Yunho closes his eyes and wraps his arms tightly around Changmin's body, rocking him gently from side to side. "You smell nice."
Especially when Yunho goes and says something like this. Oh fuck you for being so perfect, Jung.

his pupils dilate uncontrollably, sunshine and color and life overloading all his senses.
All that color, at least Changmin finally gets to see the color blue and dude, I bet the brilliance of sunlight is blinding. You know how you’re sleeping and then you wake up in the middle of the night in a pitch black room and you have to pee. Well you get up to use the bathroom and then you turn on the light and it’s like a sudden blinding flash. I bet it’s like that for him, except much prolonged and so much prettier. And less smelly D:

Slowly, Changmin lets himself fade away, his fingers gently curled into Yunho's palm, his heart finally at peace.
I still can’t believe you did this : llllll

Anyway, in conclusion, I love this universe okay? And now that you know how much I love aus like this, you know to write more for me because honestly dude, the idea behind this fic, the setting and everything is A+++ and I don’t care that you think nothing happens. You can write a multi-chapter fic in this universe in which chapter after chapter, nothing happens but homin fucking and I would love it. I would attempt to wrap the fic around myself and I would drown in it. I love this and I love you and thank you for being you ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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apocryphalic April 11 2010, 08:30:20 UTC
because it didn't work : l

♥ ♥

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loveclouds April 11 2010, 08:38:38 UTC
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;_; i seriously love you. and okay fine, I KNEW YOU LOVED WORLDS LIKE THIS SINCE WE TALK LIKE 24/7 so just chalk it up to momentary brainfart, okay? ;_; i didn't think you would like this THAT MUCH LOLOLOLOL you're so adorb i don't know what to do with you, libby. ;____;

also, i kind of resent this being a lovechild of the giver because i hated that book with an unnatural kind of passion. >:l

homg I'M SORRY ABOUT KILLING THEM D: i told you, they're "SLEEPING," OKAY?! ;A; ;____; idk i just really wanted to write out that last scene where there's finally color in his life and he knows what blue is and he has yunho again and they're both HAPPY and not trapped underground and there's WIDE, OPEN, SPACES and that's all. ;_; plus an ending. haha did you get the ending? ;_; it was like...almost a pun. cuz everything is okay, and that means the end. and it was the end of the fic. .........;_; are you going to tell me i'm stupid ;____________________________________;

i don't get up to pee in the middle of the night either, btw :x

and don't try to drown in this. ;_; i need you so we can rp and i won't have to do more work by writing fic and we can just rp homin fucking every two tags, okay? okay :') ♥

i love you a lot. ;_; ♥

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apocryphalic April 11 2010, 08:43:40 UTC
ugh, you are just sgfkjsbfjhsh i tell you i love things and clearly it doesn't get through to you D: does this mean on your master f-list, this fic with get an ♥ now because i love it so much? T___T it better

i didn't like the giver either D: god, i had to read that book two times for two different classes. all those papers and shit, man, i hate it like i hate romeo and juliet with all its hidden symbolism and roses.

sleeping : l they're not sleeping like sleeping beauty, they won't wake. they're like zebra and that girl and that dude that i can't spell the name of. they do not have shadows now DD:

i got your pun, imagine my face. i'm sure you can see i am a) face-palming and b) unimpressed. very unimpressed.

DDDD: WELL YOU GET MY ANALOGY RIGHT...RIGHT?!

i can't swim very well so i drown easily : lll who is to say i haven't already drowned T____T oh rp, it's our rp anniversary soon ♥ ♥

i love you more : l i dare you to argue with me on that.

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loveclouds April 11 2010, 08:49:15 UTC
:'(((( but i have to like it for MYSELF and not just cuz i wrote it for you :'(((( ;_;

dude lol are you going to watch the rest of that show? it's good. mindfuck but good :x

;_;

idk what to say! ;A; JUST ADMIT YOU LIKE MY PUNS, OKAY!?!?!?! BE A LEAF AND BE BLOWN AWAY! ;A;

♥ okay fine i won't argue with you on it, i'll just quietly think it in my head so you can't argue with me and i automatically win anyway :)

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