lol i should have spotted, because i'm sure i must be on the second page or something by now, with how slow i read
ee i love that your yunhos are sometimes not so idealistic and more realistic with a touch of optimism
i love that yoochun doesn't necessarily end up with jaejoong even though it's otherwise canon
i love that byul shows that other side to love that isn't so selfless and altruistic as is romanticized (probably by song lyrics yoochun writes)
sfdjlasjldjf i love a lot of this
ngl, the ending took me a bit by surprise. not so much because of what happened, but the tone of it seemed so different from the rest. but still! i loved this :D
i think it's important to see people in layers. instead of like, this is right, this is wrong, etc etc. i'm glad you liked it, and i'm glad you didn't hate byul LOL ♥ this was fun to write :3
did the ending seem different?? well, i'm happy you interpreted it in your own way, hope it doesn't seem out of left field to you. :333
nah, i suspected they would get together someway or another. i just thought it'd be more dramatic and less lighthearted, considering. lol hope you don't mind the slight concrit. :D i reallyd id enjoy this
lol i should have spotted, because i'm sure i must be on the second page or something by now, with how slow i read
ee i love that your yunhos are sometimes not so idealistic and more realistic with a touch of optimism
i love that yoochun doesn't necessarily end up with jaejoong even though it's otherwise canon
i love that byul shows that other side to love that isn't so selfless and altruistic as is romanticized (probably by song lyrics yoochun writes)
sfdjlasjldjf i love a lot of this
ngl, the ending took me a bit by surprise. not so much because of what happened, but the tone of it seemed so different from the rest. but still! i loved this :D
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i think it's important to see people in layers. instead of like, this is right, this is wrong, etc etc. i'm glad you liked it, and i'm glad you didn't hate byul LOL ♥ this was fun to write :3
did the ending seem different?? well, i'm happy you interpreted it in your own way, hope it doesn't seem out of left field to you. :333
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and ohh lol. well maybe i should just re-read it. xD
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hahahaha i'm just happy you liked it. my face is all :D except with teeth LOL
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