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[BTS] Concrete Feet

Sep 19, 2014 12:29

Title: Concrete Feet
Characters: Yoongi, Nam Joon, Jimin
Words: 3.2k
Summary: Yoongi wonders if choosing him had been a mistake on Death's part.
Continuation of this story

( Yoongi stared at the white wall, trying his hardest not to tremble under Nam Joon’s gaze. Finally, Nam Joon broke the silence, “You’re supposed to be indifferent toward your assignments.” “The bastard deserved it,” Yoongi spat. )

character: nam joon, character: jimin, death!au, character: yoongi, pairing: yoongi/jimin, fandom: bangtan

Comments 12

jimoron September 20 2014, 07:39:54 UTC

I DIDN'T KNOW YOU HAD ANOTHER ONE OMFFFFFFFFG

edit: wait nvm, i think this is the incompleted one you showed me...
OMG YES IT IS IM CRYING THAT SUBTLE NAMJIN I SEE YOU. BUT ALSO.. THE START OF DARK JIMIN CAN I GET A HALLELUJAH.

lovebeat_down September 21 2014, 04:16:19 UTC

SHHH! What who said anything about namjin? Jin isn't even in the story yet

You know how many partially done stories I have been neglecting for this verse, which reminds me we should maybe work on those....

jimoron September 21 2014, 06:40:39 UTC

sry you just like them so much i had to mention them. LMAO HOW MANY MORE DO YOU HAVE??

lovebeat_down September 21 2014, 23:31:28 UTC

... more than the ones i showed you... and none of them are near completion OTL

bcnf3nf September 20 2014, 12:00:44 UTC

HELLO

so uh. i just read this and the related stories and I LOVE THIS AU???

jimin killing things to meet yoongi!!!! i didnt know i would like it this much.............

also you're really great with words

this was rly good. wo w.

lovebeat_down September 21 2014, 04:18:15 UTC

the first time I write from Jimin's point of view and I make him a murderer *sigh*

thank you ^_^

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lovebeat_down September 21 2014, 04:53:30 UTC

Thanks ^_^

I apologize in advance for all the pain Nam Joon will have to endure. This verse will be continued... eventually... bear with me, I'm a nervous writer

xglimpsex September 21 2014, 01:08:55 UTC

I'M GOING TO SCREAM OH MY FUCKING GOD MY HEART STOPPED AT THE LAST SENTENCE PARK JIMIN

lovebeat_down September 21 2014, 04:47:21 UTC

Park Jimin is the hardest person to write -_-
I don't know how you do it

(and thus begins Jimin's questionable hobby)

xglimpsex September 21 2014, 05:04:07 UTC

I do it by not writing Jimin.

I focus on Yoongi and then Jimin just happens naturally. Does that make sense? Like once I start an outline for Yoongi, Jimin just appears and weaves his way into the story line through force of compatibility.

In any case, this is dark and brilliant without being too heavy or devastating and it's a perfect balance.

lovebeat_down September 21 2014, 23:35:42 UTC

thank you ^_^

canadaphile July 25 2015, 00:19:48 UTC

QwQ Ji-Jimin...sweet pea...don't do that. This crush is so not healthy and will turn your behaviour super criminal. THAT DOVE DIDN'T DESERVE TO DIE, DAMMIT.

=^..^=~