fic: Closer (Frank/Gerard)

[lovebashed]

I’m trying to kill my writer's block, so I wrote something for the porn battle meme (ha ha, I know, what?). But it turns out I can’t write anything short so the fic doesn’t fit the character limit they have. So I’m just gonna post it here instead!

Closer
Frank/Gerard
~1800 words
R (for pointless, plotless porn /o\)
for the prompt shandySet during

Comments

[mivsi]

\o/ Yay! Warped Tour (04, 05 - doesn't matter which, they're at different ends of the spectrum) is one of my favorites. You write in this part of the timeline so well. Ughhh, Frank. Love this.

(Ridiculously enough, I think my favorite part was the tiny mention of baby/pre-Umbrella Academy. Spaceboy. Eee!)

[lovebashed]

\\\o/// yay! warped tour is my faaaavorite! thank you! so glad you liked it!

[scatterheart]

That pointy nose brushes against Frank's eyebrow as Gerard inspects Frank's entire skull in a way that reminds Frank of monkeys grooming each other’s furs.
I'm not sure why that one stood out exactly, but I can SEE this. ♥

Also, kind of random, but I really like the little details you throw in, like Frank's hip falling asleep or the shouts from the party. It's nothing that special, I think? But it just really stood out to me here, in a good way, where it made everything feel more realistic.

[lovebashed]

thank you so much! i'm a whore for detail. sometimes it feels like detail is all i ever write. but i'm glad it works here. thank you again!

[mxtape]

♥! I love how your floor!sex is all cuddly and charming, ugh! *.*

[lovebashed]

ahahha, they are so vanilla in my head. it's ridiculous.

[allyndra]

This whole thing was awesome, but I got absurdly excited that Gerard was drawing Spaceboy. Really, like I was doing victory arms sitting at my computer. I also really loved this:

"Shut up. I'm here because I fucking wanna be here. With you. So just. Quiet now. Or loud, if that's what you want. Whatever you want," Frank promises against Gerard's mouth before sucking his crooked lip between his teeth.

Thanks for sharing.

[lovebashed]

thank you so much for reading! i'm glad you liked it. :)

[shinodarely]

awwww I loved it. Good times, good times. Really well writen thank you!!!

[lovebashed]

thank you so much! :D