Erosion Part V (Veronica/Logan) PG [WIP]

[rejeneration]

Title: Erosion
Author: rejeneration, but you can call me Jen.
Pairing/Character: Logan/Veronica, Tom, Trina, Xavier, smidge o’ the Wallace Fennel
Word Count: Part V: 3880
Rating: NC-17 overall, this part PG
Summary: Love, actually.
Spoilers/Warnings: Season 2; This is FF.
A/N: A million years ago I started writing a story. Since then I have gone on to dabble

Comments

[polarthestral]

I didn't realize it at the time, how unsympathetic a character in Veronica I was writing. I have my issues with Veronica, it's true. Inadvertently, I guess I loaded them up on her. Because other than making some very bad decisions, I didn't want Veronica to be unsympathetic.

That could be true, but I think it's more because I have issues with Veronica so whenever I read about her bad behaviour now, I don't really rose-colour-excuse her any more. Death of the author and all that jazz, it's all about the reading now. Heh.

I think it was wise of you to unload any issues you have with Veronica onto her characterisation in this story. It would be impossible to work through those issues if you didn't explore them. Any positive LV outcome will be absolutely well earned and far more fulfilling for me, as a reader, if those issues are explored too. After all, I share them.

I didn't want Veronica to be unsympathetic. One of the very important conversations coming up between Logan and Veronica very shortly here is going to be about Tom. Something you've picked up on and I'm extremely glad for it.

Is this about my comment that we don't know enough about Tom for me to hate him because of this reaction alone? I'm glad there will be backstory that sheds light on why Veronica would decide to go for full custody because that, to me, just adds insult to injury after she tells him she's leaving him for another guy. Unless there's just cause. I didn't want to say he'd done nothing wrong, this is the Neptune realm after all. :)