Every Heat Wave Has Its Ice Age -- tinkabell007

Jun 18, 2006 15:57

Title: Every Heat Wave Has Its Ice Age
Author: tinkabell007
Rating: NC-17 for sexuality and language
Word count: 10,966
Spoiler: Mid season 2, story takes place short after 2x08
Summary: Snark and a fake heat wave are never a good combination, especially when it comes to Veronica and Logan.

Notes: A gigantic THANK YOU goes out there to chaotic4life Without you, there ( Read more... )

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reve_silencieux June 18 2006, 17:47:59 UTC
Okay, so normally I hate reading fics where there's cheating involved, but this was so organic, that I can't complain. The snark, the bitterness, the unintentional slips - it all led up to them finally understanding each other and it worked great. And did I mention hot? Heee!! (no pun intended) The way they finally started making out with Logan telling her first? And Veronica making the move? Perfect, because if they had just ripped their clothes off first it would have been too much.

I also loved how Veronica realized in the end that things still wouldn't be perfect - that's how life is, and there will be guilt over cheating on Duncan. She can't just switch guys again and there not be problems.

I must also mention that I loved how you worked up to the smut, writing a very nice and long fic! Throwing in some PI work was fun too, gave it a bit more plot even if we knew find out what she was looking for. Oh well. ;-)

Wow, I'm first - that's a first for me. :D

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tinkabell007 June 19 2006, 20:55:26 UTC
Wow, thank you so much for your reviewing :)

I've got to be honest, it was my very first time writing a NC17 part, and I was beyond nervous! I'm just glad that in the end it worked out so nicely.

And who knows, maybe there is going to be a sequel, revealing what Veronica was looking for *gg*

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anonymous June 18 2006, 21:44:36 UTC
loved it ! the dialogue was great and I loved the scenario you played out!!!
awesome stuff!

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tinkabell007 June 19 2006, 20:57:35 UTC
Aww, thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)

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anonymous June 23 2006, 10:56:24 UTC
That was just wonderful - amazing dialogue and very hot!

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tinkabell007 June 25 2006, 18:02:13 UTC
Thank you ;)

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